My First Interracial Story (Feedback)

Hi, I'm looking for feedback on my story 'Black on Blonde' (it's on the site). I've had more views than for any other story but only two comments (one of which was my reply to the first comment). Interracial erotica is something I'm really interested in writing more of and have enjoyed reading some of the interracial stories on the site. I'd just like to know what people think, what they liked about it, didn't like about it and any other advice / comments and suggestions Literotica members might wish to make. I look forward to hearing from you. Happy New Year!

If you've switched your writing theme to Interracial/Black on Blonde and you've attracted more interest, then you've definitely done something right. Definitely a step forward