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Old 01-16-2016, 05:30 AM   #3151
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Old 01-24-2016, 04:48 PM   #3152
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Fairly new to the site

Hey I'm new to this and just trying my hand at writing. So please check out my story Emotionless and Emotionless Part 2. I am still working on it, just looking for feedback. Thanks


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Old 01-25-2016, 02:25 AM   #3153
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Hello, my first story has just been posted.


If you like Bigfoots banging college girls, then you should enjoy this.
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Old 01-26-2016, 07:17 AM   #3154
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hello and smooches

Hi all! I am new to the site and just had my first story posted. Please feel free to check out Mending Fences. Its a short story about a very sexy meeting between neighbors. It contains group outdoor sex, oral, anal and is MMF. I have just recently started trying my hand at writing. Hope you like it. Check out the link below.

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Old 01-28-2016, 09:46 AM   #3155
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My Valentine's Day Contest entry is up. It is A Valentine's Day Mess. It's getting a good number of views, but despite that, very little in the way of comments.

It's the 8000-word story of a brother and sister from El Salvador who are separated by adoption at a very young age. They're reunited as a Christmas gift from their parents. The story is set in New Mexico and includes some of the traditional superstitions and beliefs of the place. It isn't all fun and games. Incest/Taboo.

Your views, and comments are welcomed.
My stories

And my Valentine's Day contest entry A Valentines Day Mess. Cherry cordial, anyone?
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Old 01-30-2016, 12:22 PM   #3156
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Talking New author.

Hi all,

New to literotica, been writing for years but never really put it out there for people to read and give feedback.

Currently I have two stories,

1. My Sisters Keeper - https://www.literotica.com/s/my-sisters-keeper-1
Based on personal experience. It is a story of a younger sister who falls for her older sisters husband while trying to seduce him to test his faithfulness to her sister.

2. Neighbourhood Watch - Part 1 - https://www.literotica.com/s/neighbourhood-watch-pt-01
This is a story of a close knit neighbourhood that gets "really close". The first part is about the arrival of the newcomer Dan and he meets the welcoming committee of one.

I'm currently doing part two which is from a differ the perspective but continuing on from part 1.

Comments and feedback are welcome, especially constructive ones.


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Old 01-31-2016, 05:41 PM   #3157
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Smile Entertaining at Home

I've just posted my first story: https://www.literotica.com/s/entertaining-at-home.

A woman kicks out her boorish husband only to find herself entertaining a few of his friends who are stuck in the rain on the night of a big match.

Comments and criticism would be appreciated.
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Old 02-05-2016, 02:04 AM   #3158
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Next ("Millicent's")

Greetings, all. My next story is up, a charming little British-flavoured fable called "A Night At Millicent's"—which is not the name of a person, just to be clear, it's the name of the establishment where this takes place. Link is here: https://www.literotica.com/s/a-night-at-millicents
Do enjoy, chaps and lasses, 'tis jolly good. Ta! —Smokey
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Old 02-07-2016, 03:04 PM   #3159
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My newest story is complete. Check it out, comment on it?



Family secrets and hidden desires come to the surface when Tom agrees to come home for the holidays. 5 chapters.
WINTER BREAK: Family secrets and hidden desires come to the surface when Tom agrees to come home for the holidays. https://www.literotica.com/s/winter-break-ch-01-1

INDECENT PROPOSAL: The Kane twins 10 part adventure into twincest: https://www.literotica.com/s/indecent-proposal-7

DELETE CONTACT? A tale of reconnection: https://www.literotica.com/s/delete-contact
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