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Having recently crittered a few metal song lyrics by sexgundam666, I should probably put up or shut the F up.
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Sibling Rivalry
Two hundred sixty-five down, one more to go
Before the final stage curtain drops upon on the show
The Prophecies of old are soon to be fullfilled
A vacant throne never again to be filled
The Body of Christ, decapitated
Blindly stumbles as if the walking undead
Grasping wildly for hands, in need of being led
Arms flailing, in search of its human head
Lost is equilibrium
Stolen, the momentum
The hour swiftly approaching
Inevitable change to come
That's when the Daughter of Mary
Steps forth from the cheering crowd
Unsheathing her sword
Without a word spoke aloud
Gripping the hilt of her blade tight
With all of her might
And before her Sisters and God
In the broad of daylight
Deals the deathblow
Blood
Splattering across the snow
Screams
Wizards scrambling in hopes of capturing
Fleeting drops of the red wine in a golden chalice
Sorcerers cower, noses to the dirt in every earthly palace
Angels trumpeting, no longer sing
Choking on the vomit of their own malice
The Maiden continues without remorse
Determined, relentlessly
With brutal rage, violent force
Hacking away at each limb and knee
Leaving nothing to the Body of Christ
Leftover in the slaughter
Exit the stage, Son of God
Now, enter his only Daughter!
Two hundred sixty-five down, one more to go
Before the final stage curtain drops upon on the show
The Prophecies of old are soon to be fullfilled
A vacant throne never again to be filled
The Body of Christ, decapitated
Blindly stumbles as if the walking undead
Grasping wildly for hands, in need of being led
Arms flailing, in search of its human head
Lost is equilibrium
Stolen, the momentum
The hour swiftly approaching
Inevitable change to come
That's when the Daughter of Mary
Steps forth from the cheering crowd
Unsheathing her sword
Without a word spoke aloud
Gripping the hilt of her blade tight
With all of her might
And before her Sisters and God
In the broad of daylight
Deals the deathblow
Blood
Splattering across the snow
Screams
Wizards scrambling in hopes of capturing
Fleeting drops of the red wine in a golden chalice
Sorcerers cower, noses to the dirt in every earthly palace
Angels trumpeting, no longer sing
Choking on the vomit of their own malice
The Maiden continues without remorse
Determined, relentlessly
With brutal rage, violent force
Hacking away at each limb and knee
Leaving nothing to the Body of Christ
Leftover in the slaughter
Exit the stage, Son of God
Now, enter his only Daughter!
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Worlds At War
Lightning strikes
Ground rips apart
Motors whine, gears unwind
The End is about to start
Soon there's more than one
Monstrous tripods loom
Canvassing neighborhoods
Mechanized spiders of doom
Worlds at war
The life you have yet to live is
Nevermore
The course of history changed
Forever
Run for your lives
Ear shattering screams
Bodies crushed into pulp
Torched with laser beams
Buildings blown away
Tidal waves of debris
Seas of ash and fume
Blanketing every city
Worlds at war
The life you have yet to live is
Nevermore
The course of history changed
Forever
Run!
Run and hide!
No time to pick up the shattered pieces
Of what's left of your insignificant lives
Run, run!
Amongst those who have died
Where they did stand
Mothers with babies in hand
Sons and daughters
Husbands and wives
Forever
The course of history changed
How did we ever get to this place?
Manifest destiny gone deranged
Annihilation, extermination
Impending extinction of the human race
Running to the hills
Finding refuge underground
Earth trembling overhead
Vibrates with deafening sound
Civilization left in ruin
In a matter of hours
What will come to be
Of this planet that was ours?
Worlds at war
The life you have yet to live is
Nevermore
The course of history changed
Forever
Never
Never
Never to be the same
Lightning strikes
Ground rips apart
Motors whine, gears unwind
The End is about to start
Soon there's more than one
Monstrous tripods loom
Canvassing neighborhoods
Mechanized spiders of doom
Worlds at war
The life you have yet to live is
Nevermore
The course of history changed
Forever
Run for your lives
Ear shattering screams
Bodies crushed into pulp
Torched with laser beams
Buildings blown away
Tidal waves of debris
Seas of ash and fume
Blanketing every city
Worlds at war
The life you have yet to live is
Nevermore
The course of history changed
Forever
Run!
Run and hide!
No time to pick up the shattered pieces
Of what's left of your insignificant lives
Run, run!
Amongst those who have died
Where they did stand
Mothers with babies in hand
Sons and daughters
Husbands and wives
Forever
The course of history changed
How did we ever get to this place?
Manifest destiny gone deranged
Annihilation, extermination
Impending extinction of the human race
Running to the hills
Finding refuge underground
Earth trembling overhead
Vibrates with deafening sound
Civilization left in ruin
In a matter of hours
What will come to be
Of this planet that was ours?
Worlds at war
The life you have yet to live is
Nevermore
The course of history changed
Forever
Never
Never
Never to be the same
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Chemical Warfare
Lock and load
Shoot it up
Do it again
Can't get enough
Life going nowhere fast
As you continue running
Dodging
Round after round
Rather than holding your ground
With stealth and cunning
Standing and fighting
For your inalienable right
To see the world about you through undialated eyes
To actually feel what it is like to be
Alive and carefree
Always easier to believe in the same old lies
Chemical Warfare
The coward's way out that never leads anywhere
Duck, run for cover
Bombs bursting in the air
Take a few more hits from the bong
And just sit there and stare
Incoming, head for the bunker
As the world comes crashing down
Fire!
FIRE!
Take another snort from the mirror
And get even
Higher
HIGHER
Leave your worries behind
Nevermind
That the only life you've taken for granted
Is bleeding out
Bleeding dry
Why bother to even try
Unable to find a measure of peace
War machine continues to roll
Tommorrow, just like yesterday
The day to day coping takes it's toll
The coping mechanisms take control
Corroding, eating away your soul
Chemical Warfare
Why bother to even care
Lock and load
Soon there will be nothing more to fear
Shoot it up
Take another snort from the mirror
It's always easier to believe in the same old lies
Just keep firing away at the enemy in your sight
Fire!
FIRE!
Until you can no longer can see the whites of their eyes
Fire!
FIRE!
Just enough to make it through one more night
Lock and load
Shoot it up
Do it again
Can't get enough
Life going nowhere fast
As you continue running
Dodging
Round after round
Rather than holding your ground
With stealth and cunning
Standing and fighting
For your inalienable right
To see the world about you through undialated eyes
To actually feel what it is like to be
Alive and carefree
Always easier to believe in the same old lies
Chemical Warfare
The coward's way out that never leads anywhere
Duck, run for cover
Bombs bursting in the air
Take a few more hits from the bong
And just sit there and stare
Incoming, head for the bunker
As the world comes crashing down
Fire!
FIRE!
Take another snort from the mirror
And get even
Higher
HIGHER
Leave your worries behind
Nevermind
That the only life you've taken for granted
Is bleeding out
Bleeding dry
Why bother to even try
Unable to find a measure of peace
War machine continues to roll
Tommorrow, just like yesterday
The day to day coping takes it's toll
The coping mechanisms take control
Corroding, eating away your soul
Chemical Warfare
Why bother to even care
Lock and load
Soon there will be nothing more to fear
Shoot it up
Take another snort from the mirror
It's always easier to believe in the same old lies
Just keep firing away at the enemy in your sight
Fire!
FIRE!
Until you can no longer can see the whites of their eyes
Fire!
FIRE!
Just enough to make it through one more night
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Even with the mention of The Body of Christ, having just read Bloody Mary, that's who's daughter I was thinking of right up until the end. I liked the image of Bloody Mary's daughter better. Superstition mixed with religion...
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Shouldn't the spider be a raven with a line like nevermore? And the tripod would/could be the beak. The screams mixed with the caw of the raven. I'm sure it would even be possible to slide more Poe in. Telltale hearts underground...
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So are you going for raw throat metal or metal that could possibly make it on the radio? I want to go over Chemical Warfare but if you're thinking screaming metal then eh, it's all right.
EDIT: for what I mean by go over take a look at my comment on Decimation.
EDIT: for what I mean by go over take a look at my comment on Decimation.
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Also, after reading these, I'd love to see what you do with a song titled. I Got 99 Problems But You Ain't One. A good ol' fuck you song.
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I was going for more of a tribute to War Of The Worlds by H.G. Wells.
Poe never even crossed my mind.
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The current version of Decimation came off in my mind as pretty watered down radio metal of 10 years ago. The airwaves were just innundated with loud guitars and shouters and it was all very mediocre.
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This is what I'm hearing...
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=OClxteRPsdc
EDIT: chic version
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=HjaadcFBp5s
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Balls.
My left brain is saying I'm already juggling enough hot plates at the moment.
My right brain is currently writing it.
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Spirits Of Vengeance
Anguished
Tormented souls cry out for revenge
Something wicked comes your way to avenge
Bring the pain to those who delight in misery
Ghost riders in the night
Trampling judge and jury
Feel Hell's fury
Operating under cover of darkness
Your evil deed makes us
Bash you unconscious
Blunt force trauma
Surgical extraction of your penance
Whatever your victims need
Final is the chapter
We've penned to your drama
Here we come now
Devoid of conscience
With justice to dispense
In the twisted manner how
That only makes perfect sense
Your choice of torments
Spirits of vengeance
If arson is your game
Then you shall learn
What your flesh feels like
To sizzle, blister, burn
When blood is spilled
You must pay the price
Only slow exanguination of your body will suffice
If torture is your forte
Then you'd better be prepared
To be ripped limb from limb
With no limb spared
Poetic justice
Savage with rhyme and reason
No rest for the wicked during hunting season
Here we come now
Devoid of conscience
With justice to dispense
In the twisted manner how
That makes only perfect sense
Your choice of torments
Spirits of vengeance
Helpless
See through the eyes of your victims
Feel yourself extinguished
Forced to die
Now that you've punched your own ticket
Beg for forgiveness
Time to pucker up
Kiss your ass goodbye
Spirits of vengeance
Anguished
Tormented souls cry out for revenge
Something wicked comes your way to avenge
Bring the pain to those who delight in misery
Ghost riders in the night
Trampling judge and jury
Feel Hell's fury
Operating under cover of darkness
Your evil deed makes us
Bash you unconscious
Blunt force trauma
Surgical extraction of your penance
Whatever your victims need
Final is the chapter
We've penned to your drama
Here we come now
Devoid of conscience
With justice to dispense
In the twisted manner how
That only makes perfect sense
Your choice of torments
Spirits of vengeance
If arson is your game
Then you shall learn
What your flesh feels like
To sizzle, blister, burn
When blood is spilled
You must pay the price
Only slow exanguination of your body will suffice
If torture is your forte
Then you'd better be prepared
To be ripped limb from limb
With no limb spared
Poetic justice
Savage with rhyme and reason
No rest for the wicked during hunting season
Here we come now
Devoid of conscience
With justice to dispense
In the twisted manner how
That makes only perfect sense
Your choice of torments
Spirits of vengeance
Helpless
See through the eyes of your victims
Feel yourself extinguished
Forced to die
Now that you've punched your own ticket
Beg for forgiveness
Time to pucker up
Kiss your ass goodbye
Spirits of vengeance
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And this is what it's like in my head when I hear/ready lyrics/poetry
Anguished, tormented souls cry out for revenge
Something wicked comes your way to avenge
Bring the pain to those who delight in misery
Ghost riders in the night
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k9o78-f2mIM
Trampling judge and jury
Feel Hell's fury
http://media-cache-ec0.pinimg.com/originals/28/f4/1d/28f41dde4b04473d39757ce91e89ae87.jpg
Operating under the cover of darkness
Whatever it takes, bash you unconscious
Blunt force trauma
Surgical extraction of your penance
Final chapter penned to your drama
No escaping your last sentence
Here we come now
Devoid of conscience
With justice to dispense
In the twisted manner how that makes only perfect sense
Your choice of torments
Spirits Of Vengeance
If arson is your game, then you shall learn
What your flesh feels like to sizzle, blister, burn Best friend who was burned over 30% of her body
When blood is spilled, you must pay the price
Only slow exanguination of your body will suffice
If torture is your forte, then you'd better be prepared
To be ripped limb from limb with no limb spared Putting friend's leg back in a straight line and using beach towels as a tourniquet while her son screams
Poetic justice with savage rhyme and reason
No rest for the wicked during hunting season
Here we come now
Devoid of conscience
With justice to dispense
In the twisted manner how that makes only perfect sense
Your choice of torments
Spirits Of Vengeance
Helpless, see through the eyes of your victims
Beg for forgiveness, feel your body die
Now that you punched your own ticket
Time to pucker up and kiss your ass goodbye ha ha ha, do I even need to say it!
Anguished, tormented souls cry out for revenge
Something wicked comes your way to avenge
Bring the pain to those who delight in misery
Ghost riders in the night
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k9o78-f2mIM
Trampling judge and jury
Feel Hell's fury
http://media-cache-ec0.pinimg.com/originals/28/f4/1d/28f41dde4b04473d39757ce91e89ae87.jpg
Operating under the cover of darkness
Whatever it takes, bash you unconscious
Blunt force trauma
Surgical extraction of your penance
Final chapter penned to your drama
No escaping your last sentence
Here we come now
Devoid of conscience
With justice to dispense
In the twisted manner how that makes only perfect sense
Your choice of torments
Spirits Of Vengeance
If arson is your game, then you shall learn
What your flesh feels like to sizzle, blister, burn Best friend who was burned over 30% of her body
When blood is spilled, you must pay the price
Only slow exanguination of your body will suffice
If torture is your forte, then you'd better be prepared
To be ripped limb from limb with no limb spared Putting friend's leg back in a straight line and using beach towels as a tourniquet while her son screams
Poetic justice with savage rhyme and reason
No rest for the wicked during hunting season
Here we come now
Devoid of conscience
With justice to dispense
In the twisted manner how that makes only perfect sense
Your choice of torments
Spirits Of Vengeance
Helpless, see through the eyes of your victims
Beg for forgiveness, feel your body die
Now that you punched your own ticket
Time to pucker up and kiss your ass goodbye ha ha ha, do I even need to say it!
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Write a killer metal song! Good music/lyrics shut me up.
Like Disturbed, Down With The Sickness
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Fq3QmtV8vT0
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His Name Be Praised
Let his name be praised
His glorious countenance be raised
Up on pillars of onyx and obsidian
Sculpted with devotion
Carved out of care and love
Chiseled with precision
And along with all the above
Most importantly
with Sin
Praise Satan, Praise Satan
Don't you be dissin him
Don't be hatin
He's quite the catch
That you're sister should be datin
For you, he's awaitin, anticipatin
Praise Satan, praise Satan
Embrace He who always managed to take the blame
Praise Satan, praise Satan
For your blasphemies, cursing that flowerchild's name
Praise Satan, praise Satan
That hippy who receives all the attention and fame
To which our Prince of Darkness
Is worthy of his rightful claim
Don't be shy
He's really not such bad guy
Afterall, how many angelic beings do you know
Take the fall, with no questions asked
So, praise him
Say his name twice, chant like a monk
While spinning around counter clockwise
In an upside down pentagram
Painted with your own blood
Do it with zest and spunk
Or do it while your fornicatin
Idolatrizing, alduteratin
And to thoroughly please him
For it does thoroughly please him
To say his name when you're masterbatin
Master of All That Is Wicked
Come forth and reveal your true divinitiy
Take us into your loving arms
Grace us with your hallowed celebrity
Bless us with spells and charms
Hexes that won't lead us into harms way
But most importantly
Along with all of the above
With all of your unconditional Love
Lead us astray
Let the choirboys have a turn at singing his name
PRAISE SATAN, PRAISE SATAN
DON'T YOU BE DISSIN HIM
DON'T BE HATIN
FOR YOU, HE'S AWAITIN, ANTICIPATIN
HE'S QUITE THE CATCH
THAT ANY FATHER WOULD WANT
HIS DAUGHTER TO BE DATIN
PRAISE SATAN, PRAISE HIM
Satan be praised
Amen
Let his name be praised
His glorious countenance be raised
Up on pillars of onyx and obsidian
Sculpted with devotion
Carved out of care and love
Chiseled with precision
And along with all the above
Most importantly
with Sin
Praise Satan, Praise Satan
Don't you be dissin him
Don't be hatin
He's quite the catch
That you're sister should be datin
For you, he's awaitin, anticipatin
Praise Satan, praise Satan
Embrace He who always managed to take the blame
Praise Satan, praise Satan
For your blasphemies, cursing that flowerchild's name
Praise Satan, praise Satan
That hippy who receives all the attention and fame
To which our Prince of Darkness
Is worthy of his rightful claim
Don't be shy
He's really not such bad guy
Afterall, how many angelic beings do you know
Take the fall, with no questions asked
So, praise him
Say his name twice, chant like a monk
While spinning around counter clockwise
In an upside down pentagram
Painted with your own blood
Do it with zest and spunk
Or do it while your fornicatin
Idolatrizing, alduteratin
And to thoroughly please him
For it does thoroughly please him
To say his name when you're masterbatin
Master of All That Is Wicked
Come forth and reveal your true divinitiy
Take us into your loving arms
Grace us with your hallowed celebrity
Bless us with spells and charms
Hexes that won't lead us into harms way
But most importantly
Along with all of the above
With all of your unconditional Love
Lead us astray
Let the choirboys have a turn at singing his name
PRAISE SATAN, PRAISE SATAN
DON'T YOU BE DISSIN HIM
DON'T BE HATIN
FOR YOU, HE'S AWAITIN, ANTICIPATIN
HE'S QUITE THE CATCH
THAT ANY FATHER WOULD WANT
HIS DAUGHTER TO BE DATIN
PRAISE SATAN, PRAISE HIM
Satan be praised
Amen
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Satan I'm fine with, it's the bible thumpin bs that really fucking makes me throw up. Religious people are just a bunch of fucking idiots pleading to have their dumb asses saved by some imaginary, ficitious entity. News Flash. It ain't happening
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The Two of Me
The two of me want you
The two of me need you
One to stay
One to go
One loves how you
tease and play
Would do anything
to make you stay
One hates how you
give yourself away
to all who come
with bills to pay
The two of me want you
The two of me need you
One to stay
One to go
One who trusts
in all you say
Who needs to believe
beyond the day
One who sees
your cold dead eyes
Wants to choke out
all your lies
The two of me want you
The two of me need you
One to stay
One to go
One to bow down at your feet
Love your body
Worship it
Complete
One to fuck you to defeat
Take your hate
and make you
eat...shit
The two of me want you
The two of me need you
One to stay
One to go
One loves how you
tease and play
Would do anything
to make you stay
One hates how you
give yourself away
to all who come
with bills to pay
The two of me want you
The two of me need you
One to stay
One to go
One who trusts
in all you say
Who needs to believe
beyond the day
One who sees
your cold dead eyes
Wants to choke out
all your lies
The two of me want you
The two of me need you
One to stay
One to go
One to bow down at your feet
Love your body
Worship it
Complete
One to fuck you to defeat
Take your hate
and make you
eat...shit
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Stereotype much?
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It Must Be Some Kind Of Love
First
Let me get this off my chest
I think it would best
If you would just shut your mouth
Next
I'm going to make a suggestion
So try for once to pay attention
Take your fingers
Out of your ears
It must be some kind of love
To keep me hanging around all these years
It must be some kind of love
Or is it insanity
That's still up for debate
Wait
Just one goddam minute
It's my argument, you can't win it
So chill, take it in stride
Hate
I hate it when you don't listen
Every other word I say, you're missing
Preoccupied with your ego
Too busy stroking it
This must be some kind of love
To keep me putting up with all your bullshit
This must be some kind of love
Or is it insanity
I'm still undecided about it
STOP
What you are doing
TAKE
A moment to see
COP
To what I've been saying
MAKE
An effort to acknowledge me
Or I'm gonna take a long walk around the block
Never to return
And set fire to the love letters
You used to send
Light'em up, watch'em burn
Once
Upon a time, long ago
All I had to do
Was be myself
Now
In order to get you to focus
On us
I have to be
A raving bitch
It must be some kind of love
It must be some kind of love
It must be some kind of love
Or insanity
I'm not sure which
First
Let me get this off my chest
I think it would best
If you would just shut your mouth
Next
I'm going to make a suggestion
So try for once to pay attention
Take your fingers
Out of your ears
It must be some kind of love
To keep me hanging around all these years
It must be some kind of love
Or is it insanity
That's still up for debate
Wait
Just one goddam minute
It's my argument, you can't win it
So chill, take it in stride
Hate
I hate it when you don't listen
Every other word I say, you're missing
Preoccupied with your ego
Too busy stroking it
This must be some kind of love
To keep me putting up with all your bullshit
This must be some kind of love
Or is it insanity
I'm still undecided about it
STOP
What you are doing
TAKE
A moment to see
COP
To what I've been saying
MAKE
An effort to acknowledge me
Or I'm gonna take a long walk around the block
Never to return
And set fire to the love letters
You used to send
Light'em up, watch'em burn
Once
Upon a time, long ago
All I had to do
Was be myself
Now
In order to get you to focus
On us
I have to be
A raving bitch
It must be some kind of love
It must be some kind of love
It must be some kind of love
Or insanity
I'm not sure which
Tsotha
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Burn letters, Magnetron? That feels a bit like emo metal.
But I liked the caps in the middle, definitely feeling the vocal there.Similar threads
