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Hey fellow readers,

This is my first time writing a story for submission and would really like someone to read over and give me notes on what they think. My story is about a couple who are gradually getting into the hotwife lifestyle. It is kind of long (currently at 13 pages). If you are interested please message me.

13 pages means nothing. How many words?

A Literotica page is about 3,750 words, a Word page (which I suspect is what you mean) might be 300 - 400 words, depending on font size, margins, etc. Do a word count, and let folk know.

As a heads up, you might want to do some homework on the category you propose putting it in - Loving Wives has lost its plain English meaning here on Lit. Erotic Couplings might be fewer readers, but might also be less hostile - check out various stories with similar themes (search using tags) to see what kind of commentary those stories are getting.