When your story seems to be going downhill...

Kantarii said:

I enjoyed reading it even though the writing style differs from mine. Still, it kept my interest. I love background story as opposed to a “stroker”. It may be the weekend before I can actually read it through and offer a more refined critique so bare with meKant

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CoffeeWithMonkeys said:

So my latest chapter seems to be doing now as well as the first 4. I knew I probably wouldn't keep the same amount of readers with each chapter but have had great feedback from people excited to see what the next chapter would bring.

New chapter went up yesterday and it's doing ok, but seems like it's not being as well loved as the others.
I would LOVE some feedback letting me know if people like the direction it's going, or it's getting boring, or anything they might like to see happen, but so far no comments or emails about it

If anyone wants to take the time to read it I would love you forever! And if you give me some much craved feedback, I'd love you even longer!
https://www.literotica.com/s/no-such-thing-as-time-ch-05

As always, thanks!

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8letters said:

Is this the first chapter after they've had sex? I could see a drop off for that.

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CoffeeWithMonkeys said:

It is, but they do have a quickie in this chapter too.

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8letters said:

I've not read the story, I'm not a Romance reader and I don't write a multiple chapter stories. But I'd think most of the dramatic tension from the story is gone now that they've had sex. Before, it was "Will they?" Now, it's "Of course they will."

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electricblue66 said:

It depends what else is going on in the story. It's not only about sex for Romance readers, they like all the stuff about life, too.

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