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Old 08-21-2013, 03:35 PM   #2901
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Old 08-21-2013, 03:37 PM   #2902
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Old 08-22-2013, 05:59 AM   #2903
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Old 08-26-2013, 06:04 PM   #2904
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My new tale

Just looking for more feedback on my first story posted here at Literotica. So far, it seems to be getting a decent amount of attention. Just looking to see what others think.

http://www.literotica.com/s/lucky-camper

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Old 08-26-2013, 06:29 PM   #2905
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New chapter of "Everyone Loves My Ass."

It's only about four years late in coming, but who's counting?

http://www.literotica.com/s/everyone...s-ch-07?page=1
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Old 08-26-2013, 08:35 PM   #2906
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My Summer Lovin Contest Entry

The Summer Mom made me a man.

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-summ...-made-me-a-man

After all, shouldn't a boys first time be with a woman who loves him?
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Old 09-02-2013, 06:11 PM   #2907
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Schoolgirl Domme

A new four-part story (though at time of posting this Parts 1,2 and 4 are up - still waiting for 3!) It's a schoolgirl uniform story, with lezdom, MILF, spanking, lots of white shirts and school ties, and one or two surprises. Hope you all enjoy it. Starts here: http://www.literotica.com/s/schoolgirl-domme-ch-01
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Old 09-02-2013, 07:15 PM   #2908
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The A 101 Series

Four new stories, just freshly released.

A 101: The Smoking Room

A 101: Forced Perspective

A 101: Field Test

A 101: d2c

Themes: Mind Control, subliminals, gas, drugs, knockout, hypnosis, smoking, nudity, exhibitionism, masturbation, M/F, F/F, lab coat fetish, gas mask fetish
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Old 09-05-2013, 10:01 AM   #2909
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The third and final chapter of my celebrity series featuring Emma Watson.

http://www.literotica.com/s/emma-ch-03-3

For your convenience, the links to first two are below. They work best as a whole, but each story is still capable of working by themselves:

http://www.literotica.com/s/emma-9

http://www.literotica.com/s/emma-ch-02-3
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Old 09-05-2013, 10:41 PM   #2910
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"Last Weekend" is my first attempt at something taboo: Caleb's dating his best friend's sister. They spend one last weekend together in a secluded cabin before college will split them apart...

http://www.literotica.com/s/last-weekend-1

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Old 09-07-2013, 02:56 PM   #2911
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New story posted within the last day or so and would love for you all to give it a read:

Title: A Matter of Discipline

Category: NonConsent/Reluctance

http://www.literotica.com/s/a-matter-of-discipline-1
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Old 09-19-2013, 05:47 PM   #2912
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Tick Tock Chapter 2 should post on Friday or Saturday (9/20-21) at the latest. I seem to have a lot of interest and curiosity about this story. I had this story idea 12 years ago only to stop writing to take a 10 year break. This story overpowers colleen and the antique grandfather clock opens up many other realms for her. Thank you to all for the feedback and encouragement to continue. As always, let me know what you think.

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Old 09-20-2013, 02:32 PM   #2913
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New story: Chalice of Change

I just posted a transformation story to the celebrity section, though it probably would fit better in Transsexuals, but my main character transforms from an ordinary white guy into the spitting image of a female celebrity. It also has elements of mind control and the guy is black, so it's interracial as well.

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Old 09-20-2013, 04:03 PM   #2914
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Hey everybody, I'm new here at Literotica and relatively new to writing, I'd appreciate feeback. Thanks!

The main themes are: male submission & female domination, caucasian man & black woman, cunnilingus, analingus (him on her).

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-dive
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Old 09-25-2013, 11:57 PM   #2915
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http://www.literotica.com/s/her-unexpected-shadow

featuring an erotic coupling. would be interested in reviews and ratings, it is a short story shouldn't take too long to read. Thank you for your time
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Old 09-27-2013, 10:37 PM   #2916
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Hello! I think I missed announcing my second episode of Minx http://www.literotica.com/s/minx-int...y-hunter-ep-02, but my newest story is Falling, http://www.literotica.com/s/falling-27, and it's a non-erotic romance set in Europe during World War 1. I hope you enjoy it. It's a bit of an experiment for me to see if I can write something without a sex scene that's readable.
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Old 10-03-2013, 04:13 AM   #2917
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Readers of the the Dallas Morning News Web site will soon have an experience more free advertising - for a price.

The newspaper has dropped his wall pay today, making his standard digital content free again. It intends to deploy a premium version of its site with an improved design and fewer ads later today.

The document adopts the new approach because he believes see digital players as a supplement to the printed version, and not a substitute, said Jason Dyer, Director of marketing for the journal. He had conducted research showing that 5% of the impression of the Morning News subscribers would abandon their editions printing of seven days for a full digital access, even if this digital access was free.
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Old 10-22-2013, 12:08 AM   #2918
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It's almost Halloween again, surely someone is in the mood for a ghost story?

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From "The Banshee":

There were no ghosts in the graveyard tonight, as far as Adrian could see. He'd collect his bounty and be gone, then. He passed the crooked fencepost and tramped between the overgrown plots. Many of them were small. He remembered that white lights called ghost candles are supposed to appear above the graves of children. He walked a little faster.

There, in the grass, near a grave with a rare stone marker, a patch of the white flowers bobbed in the night breeze. Bloodwort, they were called. An ugly name for such a pretty little blossom, though Adrian knew it was because the juice in the stem was red as blood. It was too cold and too late in the season for such blossoms, but here they were anyway, as they always were.

Adrian's fingers stopped a few inches from the flowers and he glanced at the headstone. He couldn't make out the name on it. Was it right to take flowers off of a grave, even if they'd only grown here by themselves? He'd come all this way, and without them he'd have no way of proving it...

There he heard it: a plaintive cry, long, low, and cold as the grave dirt beneath Adrian's feet. His knees knocked together, and his bones rattled, and his blood turned to water. He turned, he ran, he stumbled and fell and stood and ran again. Let Connor or Abigael or anyone else call him a coward if they wanted to. Some things were simply not worth being brave over.

A bear actually didn't seem so bad right now. For that matter, he'd take the Black Shuck, the wendigo, the headless man, and any number of graveyard spooks all at the same time. Anything but the banshee.


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Old 10-24-2013, 01:03 PM   #2919
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Captured!

Hi all.

MJ10 here. It's been awhile since I've posted another story, but at long last I've finally succeeded! Captured! is a deviation from my other stories. It's not as highbrow as my previous story, but if you like your tales spiced with hints of action, adventure, romance--and lots of sex--you're in luck.

The main thrust of the tale concerns our heroine Magge, a bride-to-be who is abducted by aliens en route to a retreat in the Pacific Northwest. From the moment she steps foot on the D'Ray craft, Magge struggles to survive, making compromises with her captors--and succumbing to her dark desires as well. When she is finally liberated, Magge tries to come to terms with her imprisonment, partnering with a soldier, Simeon, and plotting her return home.

Yet months of confinement have awakened a feral side in her--a longing that is not easily sated.

Will she return home? Or will the darkness of space finally claim her? Only the brunette knows for sure!

Captured! is a story of lust and desire. But it is also a love story about adversity, fidelity--and succeeding despite overwhelming odds. Also, aliens dressed as Roman soldiers. If you're into that sort of thing.


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Old 10-25-2013, 04:11 PM   #2920
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New Story - DaddyLover

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This is my most recent submission. The story deals with father/daughter incest, so be warned.
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Old 10-28-2013, 05:34 AM   #2921
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Based off a dream I had, Anna Kendrick meets a man at a movie theater and share an intimate moment. After surprising him at his apartment later in the night, she shows a kinky side that no one could have seen coming.

http://www.literotica.com/s/i-want-t...-bitch-tonight

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Old 10-28-2013, 08:05 AM   #2922
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Old 10-28-2013, 08:25 AM   #2923
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pretty nervous about my NC/R submission, its my first... i would really like any feedback you can give.

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Old 10-28-2013, 11:48 PM   #2924
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Then again, as Halloween approaches, maybe a little witchcraft is more to your liking:

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From "The Pumpkin Patch":


Ms. Marzanna was digging in a kitchen drawer, pulling out odds and ends: an old bone with a leather thong tied to it, a tiny bottle of yellow sand, a bit of dried leather with a strange letter branded on it, a jar full of the teeth of some animal—"Ah!" Ms. Marzanna came up with a stubby purple candle. The wick was singed from previous use but most of the body was intact. It felt warm when she put it in Sonia's hand. Not hot like a flame, but warm, like living skin.

"Tonight, when you're alone, take this candle and put it inside the jack o' lantern," Ms. Marzanna said. "Don't put it in there before you're ready to light it, and certainly don't keep it in there while you carry it home. Got that?"

Sonia nodded.

"Good. When you light the pumpkin think about the thing you want most in the world. As long as it stays lit, and as long as it's Halloween night, your heart's desire will be yours. But once the sun comes up or the candle goes out, the spell will be broken. Nod if you understand."

Sonia nodded three times.

"All right. And it goes without saying you oughtn't tell anyone where you got this. You've done me a good turn and you've got your payment and I wish you well with it, but don't go hanging around my door mewling like a kitten and asking for more once it's finished."

She actually pushed Sonia to the porch. Ms. Marzanna paused as Sonia wavered, a little unsteady, on her front step.

"And by the way dear..." she said, smiling ear to ear. "Happy Halloween!"

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Old 10-30-2013, 10:54 PM   #2925
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new BDSM story

I have a new BDSM story up titled 'Bad Nikki,' in which a pissed-off girlfriend takes a little revenge on her man. The BDSM aspect is light - nothing painful or heavy, unless you're severely ticklish.

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