So I was about to post looking for editors/beta readers for my new story, and I realized that I hadn't come up with a good teaser yet. I hashed one out, and I thought I'd throw it up here for some quick comments. Let me know what you think:
Frost Queen Tomiko
Frost Queen Tomiko
Taiko and her friends are Umai village's bravest heroes, living lives full of adventure, magic, and fun. But when the cruel and mysterious Lord Akio attacks they find themselves up against a stronger, darker foe than they've ever face before. Beyond even him lies the Queen of Ice, Tomiko, and a secret that Taiko must unravel if she wants to stop what is happening to her once innocent world. Join Taiko and her gang on their epic adventure as they discover the ravages of harsh bondage, the humiliation of slavery, terrifying new dangers, and their first tastes of carnal pleasures.
