I am in desperate need of help. I have recently completed my first story. It is approx. 6000 words and took me around three months to write (on and off). The story is a first person account of a mid thirties divorced female that is pulled into a group sex club by her friend. It contains a little voyeurism, spanking, straight and lesbian sex. I need help with grammar and the overall characters and plot. I you feel like giving it a read please let me know.
Thanks for taking to time to consider my story.
Thanks for taking to time to consider my story.