Because we're human and it will always happen, here's a thread for all the thank-you notes and off-topic banter that occasionally clog up the New Poems Reviews and other threads.
Enjoy.
Previous Prattle
Enjoy.
Previous Prattle
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Todski, the entire passion poem is wonderful. If you choose to edit and make it ready for more, I suggest this passage be edited similar to the following suggestion:<snip>time warps your youthful
frame as shoulders start
to droop hasn't quietened
down your mind, <snip>
Todski, the entire passion poem is wonderful. If you choose to edit and make it ready for more, I suggest this passage be edited similar to the following suggestion:
time warps youth's frameThanks for giving us your poetry. 'Tis a pleasure to read.
as shoulders droop but fails
to quiet down your mind
Thank you, it still staggers me that people read my poems at all, thanks for the edit advice too
I have seen a companion thread somewhere for the old passion thread might try dig it up coz desejod new one and bogusagains were both really good.
..1201 once posted a link called 7 rules for practicing poets....
??????????
one. links don't work over there
two. out of context. tends to create backlash. I have enough unwanted attention.
three. it is not what I say, it is what you say in response that is important
four. in this case I also left a comment.
thereby creating my very own backlash and unwanted attention
laughs
thanks, Neo, 12... glad it had its moments for you both. as to a title - since i didn't have a name for the mood i was attempting to write, or even understood quite what i was writing, no title seemed apt. it wasn't intended as some affectation.
12, i agree with you about the final lines, though i like a coupla others, too.
gah! put a title on it, it's on my favorite poem list, along with Harry and 1 other people!
g-zus, I liked the whole goddamn thing, just thought the last five where bestthanks, Neo, 12... glad it had its moments for you both. as to a title - since i didn't have a name for the mood i was attempting to write, or even understood quite what i was writing, no title seemed apt. it wasn't intended as some affectation.
12, i agree with you about the final lines, though i like a coupla others, too.
ok, keep yer pigtails on already, i was playing with youg-zus, I liked the whole goddamn thing, just thought the last five where best
oh, never mindok, keep yer pigtails on already, i was playing with you
but... reminds you of what? i'm bemused. actually, just nosy
*sighs* okoh, never mind
anon is a sheet head from the Invisible Simpyre, - take that back, they probably don't know who Mandela was.Thank you Oldbear & Angie for likin' "RIP Mandiba " & John Johnson & Scotsman for favouritin' same : noticed an Anon postin' anti-Nelson Mandela comments also !?? There was a Maggie Thatcher led Conservative faction that propped up the illegal minority Apartheid regime with Hang Mandela posters in their College dorms : current Brit PM Cameron had such a poster in his Undergrad days in his dorm !?! This Anon probably has crawled out of such dark , subterrean regions as previously existed but being afraid of retribution or lawsuit has cowardly hidden behind Anonymity .