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Old 11-05-2014, 08:53 PM   #3051
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The conclusion of Mom Will Do Anything is up

http://www.literotica.com/s/mom-will-do-anything-ch-02
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Old 11-08-2014, 11:01 AM   #3052
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D/s fantasy

http://www.literotica.com/s/rendezvous-fantasy

D/s (light), Mdom, fsub, romance, all sex, oral**, slapping. This is an OLD story, fairly short, but some people seemed to really like it in the past.

Hope you enjoy! (Feel free to let me know if you did; I haven't shared my work much.)
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Old 11-09-2014, 03:41 PM   #3053
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http://www.literotica.com/s/goodhead-farm-pt-01

And this one. Mdom, lots of oral, will have a more romantic/domestic element in the further chapters. It's a work in progress, hopefully the rest will be up soon...
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Old 11-10-2014, 04:17 AM   #3054
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The first couple of women of wrestling-based stories that I've submitted to the site have been approved.

Rebellious Boom - TNA Wrestling story. The gorgeous TNA Knockout Rebel has a very unique, and pleasurable, way to make peace with the group of three Jersey Shore-gimmick hunks of The BroMans of Robbie E, Jessie, and DJ Zima.

The Unbeaten Challenge - S. Sparx - The stunning Seleziya Sparx (of ROH and AIW fame) attempts to defeat The Unbeaten, Danny Pounder (OC) in a match where is she loses, she gets fucked in the ring. I'm sure you can guess which way the contest goes...
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Old 11-11-2014, 09:52 AM   #3055
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Two more stories

Two more; Goodhead Farm chapters 3/4: http://www.literotica.com/s/goodhead-farm-pt-02

...and 'the Maids' chapters 1-5. http://www.literotica.com/s/the-maids-pt-01

Both are oral heavy, male dom / female sub heavy. The Farm one has more of a romantic element, which expands as the story progresses, whereas the Maids are basically fantasy sex slaves.
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Old 11-11-2014, 02:03 PM   #3056
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http://www.literotica.com/stories/sh...practice-dates

A sequel to an earlier story I wrote.
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Old 11-11-2014, 06:29 PM   #3057
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War Letters

For readers of GM stories who'd like to read a bittersweet officer-enlisted man WWII love story to mark Veteran's Day:

http://www.literotica.com/s/war-letters
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Old 11-13-2014, 08:23 AM   #3058
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Driving home for christmas

Well here is my latest offering it tells the tale of a man driving to be with his children and reflecting on his life and the role that Christmas has played in that turmoil.

http://www.literotica.com/s/driving-...or-christmas-1

It's a bit on the long side, sorry about that. I hope you find it was worth it.
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Old 11-15-2014, 07:13 PM   #3059
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I have a new story up in the BDSM category.

Mercedes Bends.

Even the lady Mercedes must obey the rules.

http://www.literotica.com/s/mercedes-bends-1
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Old 11-16-2014, 08:41 PM   #3060
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My very first! It's a group sex story about a shy girl who gets involved in some hot and heavy action, mostly female/male, but also some FF, MM, MMF ...

http://www.literotica.com/s/explorations-on-the-trail
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Old 11-24-2014, 12:05 AM   #3061
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First Story

Hi all. I've just posted my first story about a Regency-era duke starting an incestuous relationship with his youngest daughter. I'm curious what you think, and I'm open to ideas on where to take this next. Thank you!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/sh...rriage-lessons
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Old 11-28-2014, 10:22 AM   #3062
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My Winter contest story is up

Her Best Friend For Christmas a first time lesbian story

http://www.literotica.com/s/her-best...-for-christmas
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Old 12-02-2014, 06:48 AM   #3063
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New story out today

This one is my first try at Aunt Nephew

Auntie Sin

http://www.literotica.com/s/auntie-sin
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Old 12-05-2014, 04:56 AM   #3064
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Third part to series after 9 years!

I finally wrote a follow on to the first two chapters of my "To Take Advantage..." BDSM stories. (They could be in the NC/reluctance category too). The new chapter is pretty short, but I'm already well on the way with chapter 4 - no 9 year break this time!

You can find the new chapter at:

www.literotica.com/s/to-take-advantage-ch-03-of-two-sisters

Hope you enjoy it, as always any feedback comments or criticism is appreciated.

Mike
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Old 12-16-2014, 06:47 AM   #3065
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I finally posted a new chapter in my Non-Human story, Alraune Mandragora

http://www.literotica.com/s/alraune-mandragora-ch-04

It has been a long time. I apologize to any readers I left hanging! Thank you for your feedback in the meantime, it has been encouraging.

A new chapter of my first story The Cross (Mature) is on its way. Andrew returns!

I have a new story in Mature as well, titled The Practice. It is about a boy and his high school principal, Elena.

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-practice-ch-01

Thank you to the readers who took the time to comment. I never get a chance to discuss my erotic fiction, so it is appreciated.
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