dansouthwest
Really Experienced
- Joined
- Aug 26, 2016
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Good afternoon,
I have recently started writing and I would love to know if someone out there could proof read my work and give me pointers.
My first story is under Erotic coupling but I am hoping to develop this story with more chapters which may go under 'Anal' as well as 'group sex'.
This is my first work: https://www.literotica.com/s/london-adventures-01
As you probably can see I need help with punctuation.
I am open to feed back and positive criticism.
Thanks
Dan
I have recently started writing and I would love to know if someone out there could proof read my work and give me pointers.
My first story is under Erotic coupling but I am hoping to develop this story with more chapters which may go under 'Anal' as well as 'group sex'.
This is my first work: https://www.literotica.com/s/london-adventures-01
As you probably can see I need help with punctuation.
I am open to feed back and positive criticism.
Thanks
Dan