TheNaughtyNerd
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I've been a long-time anonymous reader on Literotica, finally decided to create an account to submit my first story. I haven't tried to write any kind of fiction since college (which was a looong time ago), so I'm more than a little nervous about whether my writing is any good or not.
If any of you have the time/inclination to read my story (linked below) and give me your thoughts on the story, the writing, what you liked, what could be better, etc. I'd certainly appreciate it.
I should mention it's an exhibitionist story.
https://www.literotica.com/s/the-beach-vacation
Thanks in advance for any advice/feedback!
If any of you have the time/inclination to read my story (linked below) and give me your thoughts on the story, the writing, what you liked, what could be better, etc. I'd certainly appreciate it.
I should mention it's an exhibitionist story.
https://www.literotica.com/s/the-beach-vacation
Thanks in advance for any advice/feedback!