Looking for editor (mother son romance)

Gamina · Feb 15, 2019

Hey all,

After a long hiatus I decided to get back into writing, and my first project is a rewrite of a previously published story about a monther modling for her son. I am taking reader feedback to change the ending of it. (more romantic than the first one)

But with English not being my native language I really could use a fresh pair of eyes on it. For both grammar as general build up feedback.

Thanks in advance!

jp55665566 · Feb 15, 2019

Gamina said:
Hey all,

After a long hiatus I decided to get back into writing, and my first project is a rewrite of a previously published story about a monther modling for her son. I am taking reader feedback to change the ending of it. (more romantic than the first one)

But with English not being my native language I really could use a fresh pair of eyes on it. For both grammar as general build up feedback.

Thanks in advance!

I focus on erotica, and not extensive character development. May I ask, are you intending to write erotica, or mere titillating prose? I'm cool with the genre. Congrats on your new avatar. john

Gamina · Feb 15, 2019

Its a mix of both, there is a substancial buildup to the climax.

(This has been my avatar for years now, so I think you are confusing me with someone else)

HeyAll · Feb 15, 2019

How long is it? When do you need it by?

Gamina · Feb 16, 2019

It's @ around 5000 words atm (just missing the last scene, plan is to have it done tonight or tomorrow depending how well my five month old sleeps)

No deadline, I am more of the its done when it is done well kind of woman

Tigersman · Feb 16, 2019

I just sent you a message about editing.

Looking for editor (mother son romance)

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