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Old 02-14-2018, 09:16 PM   #26
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Old 02-14-2018, 09:25 PM   #27
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I don't really remember anything to crazy on my stories but I did just see this one on someone else's:
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This series is the biggest piece of nonsensical shit that I've ever read in my life. It's the same garbage over and over again and it feels like it was wrote by a 15 year old.
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This was AFTER CHAPTER 10! This person read 10 Chapters to leave that comment. Honestly, I wouldn't even be mad, just impressed.
I'm astounded by how much of a story they apparently hate some people will read.
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Old 02-14-2018, 10:13 PM   #28
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Anyone ever get comments that clearly just have nothing to do with the story?

I recently deleted a Lenin quote that someone had decided to post on my story. To this day I have no idea why. It was nothing offensive but I ended up deleting it hoping that it will discourage similar comments in the future. Is this some weird trolling? Who is supposed to get upset?
I'd love a comment on one of my stories quoting Lenin. Or Trotsky. THAT is a level of commentary I can only dream about I guess.
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Old 02-14-2018, 10:31 PM   #29
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Anyone ever get comments that clearly just have nothing to do with the story?
I had a long, involved story posted as a comment, and I didn't see how it related to my story. Maybe anon did. I also had a comment that was related to the story, but which just creeped my out to the point that I *wished* it wasn't related to my story.
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Old 02-14-2018, 11:49 PM   #30
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Old 02-15-2018, 03:32 AM   #31
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Talking That the main female character in one of my stories...

Who is a rather confident young woman and a libertine, 'was a slut and I hate her!'

Granted, I get a lot of pants-on-head retarded comments from anonymous reviewers, but that one sticks out in my mind, because this is an erotic literature website and female characters are going to have sex. If they're realistic at all, they're going to love having sex. He said he loved my story, but somehow hated my main female character, because her slut past pained him so.

Hating sluts is still a thing, hm?

Good thing said character is already married and he won't have a chance to revenge hurt her...
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Old 02-15-2018, 05:14 AM   #32
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What a pile of crap.

Thank heaven it was only one page. If this is your best give up.


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Who is a rather confident young woman and a libertine, 'was a slut and I hate her!'

Granted, I get a lot of pants-on-head retarded comments from anonymous reviewers, but that one sticks out in my mind, because this is an erotic literature website and female characters are going to have sex. If they're realistic at all, they're going to love having sex. He said he loved my story, but somehow hated my main female character, because her slut past pained him so.

Hating sluts is still a thing, hm?

Good thing said character is already married and he won't have a chance to revenge hurt her...
Sounds like someone jealous because his own love-count hasn't yet hit single digits.

The 'stupidest' I've had got deleted along with a story in non-con that some anons or one persistant anon didn't seem to realise was actually sex-play between two consenting exhibitionists (I made it clear; some people were dropped on concrete as children), but my all-time favourite is this:

Just an awful story
by Anonymous user on 06/28/2017
Full of nasty, unlikable characters doing mindless things. It simply isn't entertaining in the least.

[Left on episode 14, some 65,000 words into the story.]

It's so lyrical. Everything is spelt correctly. I can just imagine if this was in the days before email.

Dear Mr Clearwater,

I am writing to you to advise you that in your latest installment of 'Nathaniel's less-than-honourable adventures', you've quite neglected to create an enjoyable experience for your reader.

Having read over sixty-five thousand words of this story (thus placing me in a position to accurately gauge this), I surmise that your characters simply will not do. They will not do, Mr Clearwater.

And therefore, I regret to inform you that I shall not be reading the final part of this story, now, or at any future date.

Good Day.

I said Good Day, Sir!

Yours,

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Old 02-15-2018, 05:59 AM   #34
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EDIT. Maybe that's what it's like to be a whore.
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Old 02-15-2018, 06:46 AM   #35
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Exclamation JasonClearwater...

That. Is...

The single best negative comment I have ever heard in my entire literary life. I am so jealous of you. If that happened on one of my stories, I would end up writing it into a story. No questions asked, nor permission requested.

Short of Kizuna Ai somehow going off on your story in a squeaky rant laced with Japanese invective, that is the greatest flame ever written. My hat is off to this monstrous failure of yours, sir. I am in awe.

That'll do, author. That'll do...
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Old 02-15-2018, 06:56 AM   #36
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That. Is...

The single best negative comment I have ever heard in my entire literary life. I am so jealous of you. If that happened on one of my stories, I would end up worrying it into a story. No questions asked, nor permission requested.

Short of Kizuna Ai somehow going off on your story in a squeaky rant laced with Japanese invective, that is the greatest flame ever written. My hat is off to this monstrous failure of yours, sir. I am in awe.

That'll do, author. That'll do...
Oh, I did work it into the story - of course I did! If someone flames me with perfect grammar, it's the least I can do.
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Old 02-15-2018, 07:56 AM   #37
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Sounds like someone jealous because his own love-count hasn't yet hit single digits.

The 'stupidest' I've had got deleted along with a story in non-con that some anons or one persistant anon didn't seem to realise was actually sex-play between two consenting exhibitionists (I made it clear; some people were dropped on concrete as children), but my all-time favourite is this:

Just an awful story
by Anonymous user on 06/28/2017
Full of nasty, unlikable characters doing mindless things. It simply isn't entertaining in the least.

[Left on episode 14, some 65,000 words into the story.]

It's so lyrical. Everything is spelt correctly. I can just imagine if this was in the days before email.

Dear Mr Clearwater,

I am writing to you to advise you that in your latest installment of 'Nathaniel's less-than-honourable adventures', you've quite neglected to create an enjoyable experience for your reader.

Having read over sixty-five thousand words of this story (thus placing me in a position to accurately gauge this), I surmise that your characters simply will not do. They will not do, Mr Clearwater.

And therefore, I regret to inform you that I shall not be reading the final part of this story, now, or at any future date.

Good Day.

I said Good Day, Sir!

Yours,

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They loved it. I can tell.
I love this! I have a mental image of a silver-haired, distinguished-looking gent, with an impeccably knotted tie (Windsor knot, of course, no gentleman would consider any other...), and a flower in the buttonhole of his Navy-blue regimental blazer, typing in a genteel fashion while nibbling a Shortbread finger and sipping a cup of Earl Grey tea; I envy you; in between the nice comments I either get worryingly obsessive scare-hounds, or psychotic, incoherent kerb-sniffers, leavened with the occasional God-shouter, who berates me for writing such filth (no doubt first having avidly read through said filth lovingly and with great attention to detail...)

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Old 02-15-2018, 08:16 AM   #38
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Oh, I did work it into the story - of course I did! If someone flames me with perfect grammar, it's the least I can do.
May I plagiarize that comment and the response for my April Fools story ("A Troll is Haunting Tex's)? It's too good.
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Dear Mr Clearwater,

I am writing to you to advise you that in your latest installment of 'Nathaniel's less-than-honourable adventures', you've quite neglected to create an enjoyable experience for your reader.

Having read over sixty-five thousand words of this story (thus placing me in a position to accurately gauge this), I surmise that your characters simply will not do. They will not do, Mr Clearwater.

And therefore, I regret to inform you that I shall not be reading the final part of this story, now, or at any future date.

Good Day.

I said Good Day, Sir!

Yours,

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They loved it. I can tell.

This is awesome. It's what Mr. Darcy might say if he were a Literotica troll.
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May I plagiarize that comment and the response for my April Fools story ("A Troll is Haunting Tex's)? It's too good.
Lol, absolutely. :-p
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I couldn't find it, but the comment I consider my stupidest was someone telling me two places were I had written something grammatically incorrect. It was a big story and the only thing the commenter thought worthy posting about it was two minor grammar errors. And the crazy thing about is that both of those sentences were grammatically correct and it was the commenter who was in the wrong.
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I couldn't find it, but the comment I consider my stupidest was someone telling me two places were I had written something grammatically incorrect. It was a big story and the only thing the commenter thought worthy posting about it was two minor grammar errors. And the crazy thing about is that both of those sentences were grammatically correct and it was the commenter who was in the wrong.
Something similar: "You need to learn, how to use commas, correctly. It should have been its, not it's."

Ironically, he was correct - the single grammatical error in the whole story was an autocorrected (wrongly) it's. I curse you, Bill Gates.
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I write quite a lot of politically incorrect humor in my stories, and was sure that I might manage to offend PC readers and draw their ire on some occasions, but to date I haven't had that happen. Maybe left-wing SJW types don't like Literotica in general, but has anyone ever had negative comments from readers who judged your story non PC compliant?
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Got one many years ago, the first time I submitted "After Midnight" here. I saved it:

your so stupid
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your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid.
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your so stupid
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your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid. your so stupid.
I don't know if that's genius or just irony.
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I write quite a lot of politically incorrect humor in my stories, and was sure that I might manage to offend PC readers and draw their ire on some occasions, but to date I haven't had that happen. Maybe left-wing SJW types don't like Literotica in general, but has anyone ever had negative comments from readers who judged your story non PC compliant?
LOL. Well, I did write something in that line and the author's note at the start (my favorite author's note of all my author's notes) addressed this possible issue. Fortunately (or unfortunately), everyone who read it saw the humor and I don't seem to have offended anyone .... but I live in hope. I think readers of LIT stories are a bit more broad-minded that one might imagine.

I did get some negative feedback a couple of times but it was more expressing concern and making a valid point or two rather than abusive in any way.

Here's a part of the author's note for that story....

"For readers with so blinding PC blinkers on who might be so offended by some of Strawberry's views, so sorry, story so fiction. Strawberry so fictional character. Strawberry's opinions and views on life, American politics, Chinese politics, guns, crime, capital punishment, insider trading, blackmail and both Chinese and Americans of various persuasions are stated for so purely fictional purposes. So intending laughter as result. So not tolerating so very stupid PC comments in Comments section. So stating if no sense of humor or if taking offense so easily, so please to be plucking eyeballs out and not reading so funny entertaining and so sexy steaming hot story any further. Author emphasizing this so very strongly.

As always, author so thanking you all (except for so unattractive PC persons and so scary Trolls naturally) so much for reading so charming well written little story and enjoying (author so hoping you to be enjoying). So hard work writing, so good to know you so enjoying happy little stories and so wanting more. Author so writing and posting for free, only reward writer getting on so esteemed and authoritative Literotica website is knowing you readers so liking story. Author so happy getting those comments and ratings Ė even those so anonymous comments from so scary trolls ... author so shivering with fear in anticipation of so scary feedback from so nasty scary American trolls (Chinese trolls of course so nice and friendly to so esteemed and so charming and so beautiful author who writing so well expressed stories about so charming and beautiful Shanghai girl).

Author also so raising eyebrow of derision in anticipation of so un-sensible feedback from PC persons so lacking in humor (so unfunny PC comments of course to be deleted so immediate by self). But really, in state of actuality, author so knowing and understanding that so nasty troll feedback so useful in letting author know all right buttons so being impacted. PC feedback of course so useless and so unwanted. PC persons so requested to so not to be wasting time of so esteemed author, who has so many better ways to spend time. Like so ongoing writing of so very sexy hot stories with so steamy endings, all to be worthy of five star ratings by so esteemed readers (author so of course not hinting)."
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It was this one I guess. My longest story posted here, 4 chapters but each chapter is only a couple pages and I think one is only one page so it's not real long, but they read, or 'skimmed' I guess the whole thing because this was posted on chapter 4.

Sorry, I did not enjoy it. The plot needs more color , where were they, describe the city, the room, even the bed. I skimmed fast. The ring was a nice shot. She should hock it if it was worth something.

And yeah it was obvious they skimmed it because in the story it says the ring was from a gumball machine so on a good day it might have been worth about a quarter.
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I just got a "stupid" comment! To a story that's almost a year old. Here it is:

"Some humor but in general your story was stupid......try again...."

I've been wondering for a long time how to make my stories better, and it's relief to know, finally, that all I have to do is stop being stupid.
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Here's a part of the author's note for that story....
Part of the author's note? PART!? Chloe have you ever written anything under 10,000 words? A shopping list? Or maybe a phone message?
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