Go Back   Literotica Discussion Board > Main Literotica Forums > Story Feedback

Reply
 
Thread Tools

Old 06-23-2017, 01:53 PM   #3326
Nathan_Wolf
Virgin
 
Nathan_Wolf is offline
Join Date: Apr 2017
Location: Massachuestts
Posts: 6
Post Secrets of Liberty Mountain - UPDATED & EXPANDED

Secrets of Liberty Mountain has been updated, re-edited, and revised to include several new chapters. Word count today stands at just over 31,500 words and is scheduled for release on Amazon at the end of August 2017.

When the first book in this epic saga is completed, all FREE copies will be removed from public view.

As a new indi-author, I am seeking BETA readers to review this evolving story and provide me with valuable feedback to make this the best story possible.

If you are interested in becoming a reader, please reply to this message or contact me via email at nathanwolf at kingstonhosting - dot - com (please convert the text into a valid email address).

Thank you and write on!

Nathan Wolf
  Reply With Quote

Old 06-23-2017, 01:56 PM   #3327
Nathan_Wolf
Virgin
 
Nathan_Wolf is offline
Join Date: Apr 2017
Location: Massachuestts
Posts: 6
As soon as the powers that be do their magic I will post the link as a reply to this message. Otherwise, the story can be found using this site's search function - just type in: Secrets of Liberty Mountain.

Thank you.
  Reply With Quote

Old 06-28-2017, 07:55 AM   #3328
RamosWashington
 
RamosWashington is offline
Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: New York City
Posts: 12
First fiction attempt since the Johnson Administration

Believe it or not, these two stories are the first fiction Ive attempted since the Johnson Administration:

https://www.literotica.com/s/sinfonia-concertante

https://www.literotica.com/s/boot-camp-for-boyfriends

I've asked for feedback in a separate thread. Thanks!
  Reply With Quote

Old 06-30-2017, 02:42 AM   #3329
Naughty_Penpal
Experienced
 
Naughty_Penpal is offline
Join Date: Apr 2017
Location: Kent, UK
Posts: 35
My latest story "Who's in Room 813?" has been published.

It is another installment of anonymous sex!

https://www.literotica.com/s/anonymous-whos-in-room-813
  Reply With Quote

Old 06-30-2017, 04:26 AM   #3330
Ekstatikoi
Virgin
 
Ekstatikoi is offline
Join Date: Apr 2017
Posts: 6
Do you like fat chicks? Do you like opium? Do you like incest? Do you like fat chicks smoking opium while having an incestuous threeway?

If so, wow, that's pretty niche, but I don't judge. Largely because I'd be a hypocrite, since my latest story has those things. https://www.literotica.com/s/a-long-night-9
  Reply With Quote

Old 06-30-2017, 06:51 AM   #3331
DKateRoberts
Virgin
 
DKateRoberts is offline
Join Date: May 2017
Posts: 1
New Writer, New Story

Hello Everyone,
I'm Kate. I'm a newbie here at Lit and I've recently put up my first story. I've been looking at this thread unsure of whether to post here or not, so if I'm transgressing please let me know.
My first story. It's called Diane's Revelation (maybe the title needs work!) and it's in Erotic Couplings for now. As the story plays out it will get much darker for a while and probably move to NonCon before coming back. Anyway most of you are much more experienced writers than I am. This is my first effort ever. I would appreciate anyone taking the time to read my story and provide comment or feedback before I release another chapter.
Be gentle, it's my first time!
Here's the link
https://www.literotica.com/s/dianes-revelation-ch-01
Thanks for your time, and thanks to those who read and comment.
DKR
  Reply With Quote

Old 06-30-2017, 11:37 PM   #3332
TornConflict
Virgin
 
TornConflict is online now
Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: Everywhere
Posts: 4
I have seriously been reading stories on here since the early 2000s' and even created an account to write my own back in 2007 or 2008. I never finished my early stories or thought they were good enough to share. Recently I have felt more comfortable in my storytelling though and have tons of ideas.

I posted my first story in the beginning of June and my second this week. I welcome any and all feedback. I know there is a few storytelling mistakes in the first story but my second one seems fixed a lot of those mistakes. I am working on a piece to the Nude Day Contest which I hope will be ready in the next day or two.

Heat Wave Love Ch 01- https://www.literotica.com/s/heat-wave-love-ch-01

Anger Management Blues Ch 01- https://www.literotica.com/s/anger-m...nt-blues-ch-01

I have gotten a little bit of feed back on Anger Management Blues from older guys curious if I was writing about being older from my own experience. That is not the case I am not even close the age of the protagonist.

Hope you enjoy the read.
  Reply With Quote

Old 07-03-2017, 02:02 AM   #3333
AwkwardMD
Really Really Experienced
 
AwkwardMD is online now
Join Date: Apr 2014
Location: Over There
Posts: 425
Chapter 2 of my labor-of-love TG story Orchid is live!

https://www.literotica.com/s/orchid-ch-02

Orchid is the most straight-ahead story I've written in years. Hell, it's practically a romance, and the protagonist is easily one of my hottest characters to date. When I have sex now, the sex scenes from Orchid are what play in my head.

I hope you all enjoy it, and have lovely days!
__________________
My word piles

Last edited by AwkwardMD : 07-03-2017 at 02:25 AM.
  Reply With Quote

Old 07-04-2017, 03:25 PM   #3334
quicky1
Really Experienced
 
quicky1 is offline
Join Date: Nov 2016
Posts: 127
Quote:
Originally Posted by DKateRoberts View Post
Hello Everyone,
I'm Kate. I'm a newbie here at Lit and I've recently put up my first story. I've been looking at this thread unsure of whether to post here or not, so if I'm transgressing please let me know.
My first story. It's called Diane's Revelation (maybe the title needs work!) and it's in Erotic Couplings for now. As the story plays out it will get much darker for a while and probably move to NonCon before coming back. Anyway most of you are much more experienced writers than I am. This is my first effort ever. I would appreciate anyone taking the time to read my story and provide comment or feedback before I release another chapter.
Be gentle, it's my first time!
Here's the link
https://www.literotica.com/s/dianes-revelation-ch-01
Thanks for your time, and thanks to those who read and comment.
DKR
hot hot hot
__________________
getting to know you matters
  Reply With Quote

Old 07-08-2017, 01:47 PM   #3335
john-the-author
Literotica Guru
 
john-the-author's Avatar
 
john-the-author is offline
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Fircrest, WA
Posts: 1,829
Submitting for the first time in ages!

I am keenly awaiting approval on two stories I've submitted, the first stuff I've submitted in almost a decade.

One's a short story about convention love with a wonderfully hairy woman nicknamed "Fluffy" and the other's the first, very long chapter, about taking a lover to Cap d'Agde.

And I shall be jumping up and down with excitement when I get word they've been approved and posted!

But I wanted to say that what prompted me to submit these is getting everyone else's new story announcements from this group and realizing "Hey, I have stuff I could submit! There's no reason not to!"

Thank you all for the encouragement.
__________________
Kim and Me and Kim, Lynn, and Me-- stories from a long, hot weekend and what followed.

What I Like on Literotica, in limerick form

"I'll take 'Things Only I Know' for $1000, Alex."

"Look at that pile of manuscripts... Pretty impressive, eh? I am now capable of committing the perfect crime, as I no longer have any fingerprints." --Neil Simon, The Star-Spangled Girl

"If your sexual fantasies were truly of interest to others, they would no longer be fantasies." --Fran Leibowitz , Metropolitan Life

Anyone in the Tacoma, WA area?
  Reply With Quote

Old 07-08-2017, 01:50 PM   #3336
john-the-author
Literotica Guru
 
john-the-author's Avatar
 
john-the-author is offline
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Fircrest, WA
Posts: 1,829
Kate:

Brava for posting! You're in exactly the right place. One should never be shy about being an author, which is a problem because even those who do it for a living are frequently shy about saying so.

Keep up the good work!

Quote:
Originally Posted by DKateRoberts View Post
Hello Everyone,
I'm Kate. I'm a newbie here at Lit and I've recently put up my first story. I've been looking at this thread unsure of whether to post here or not, so if I'm transgressing please let me know.
My first story. It's called Diane's Revelation (maybe the title needs work!) and it's in Erotic Couplings for now. As the story plays out it will get much darker for a while and probably move to NonCon before coming back. Anyway most of you are much more experienced writers than I am. This is my first effort ever. I would appreciate anyone taking the time to read my story and provide comment or feedback before I release another chapter.
Be gentle, it's my first time!
Here's the link
https://www.literotica.com/s/dianes-revelation-ch-01
Thanks for your time, and thanks to those who read and comment.
DKR
__________________
Kim and Me and Kim, Lynn, and Me-- stories from a long, hot weekend and what followed.

What I Like on Literotica, in limerick form

"I'll take 'Things Only I Know' for $1000, Alex."

"Look at that pile of manuscripts... Pretty impressive, eh? I am now capable of committing the perfect crime, as I no longer have any fingerprints." --Neil Simon, The Star-Spangled Girl

"If your sexual fantasies were truly of interest to others, they would no longer be fantasies." --Fran Leibowitz , Metropolitan Life

Anyone in the Tacoma, WA area?
  Reply With Quote

Old 07-09-2017, 06:42 AM   #3337
MelissaBaby
Literotica Guru
 
MelissaBaby's Avatar
 
MelissaBaby is offline
Join Date: Jun 2017
Posts: 527
I have begun what I expect to eventually be a 15 chapter "novelization" based on my personal experiences in the drug lifestyle, in prison and in recovery.

Sounds like fun, right?

If you are interested, please take a look. The first chapter was published last night. I hope to submit Chapter Two in a few days.

My Fall and Rise:Chapter One
__________________
My Author Page
  Reply With Quote

Old 07-11-2017, 12:01 PM   #3338
john-the-author
Literotica Guru
 
john-the-author's Avatar
 
john-the-author is offline
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Fircrest, WA
Posts: 1,829
New stories! :)

They're published! I'm very happy.

Fluffy Dining and playing with a once-a-year conference lover.

Taking Julie to Cap d'Agde Ch. 01 In which I take Julie to Cap d'Agde for a birthday present.
__________________
Kim and Me and Kim, Lynn, and Me-- stories from a long, hot weekend and what followed.

What I Like on Literotica, in limerick form

"I'll take 'Things Only I Know' for $1000, Alex."

"Look at that pile of manuscripts... Pretty impressive, eh? I am now capable of committing the perfect crime, as I no longer have any fingerprints." --Neil Simon, The Star-Spangled Girl

"If your sexual fantasies were truly of interest to others, they would no longer be fantasies." --Fran Leibowitz , Metropolitan Life

Anyone in the Tacoma, WA area?
  Reply With Quote

Old 07-13-2017, 01:56 PM   #3339
Princess_Red
Virgin
 
Princess_Red is offline
Join Date: Jun 2017
Location: England
Posts: 4
Wink Hey peepsies

Hi all!

My first story, Sex Slaves Enormous Problem (nudge nudge, wink wink) was published a few weeks ago and I've just sent chapter 2 for publishing. It's non-consent but please feel free to read if it's your kind of thing!

I apologise for the grammar etc in advance! I got myself an Editor and I think the second one will be much better in layout, grammar and structure.

It's weird thinking that people are reading something that was in my head. That they enjoy it. Dee is such a great character and I can't wait for Kinsey to take the stage, she's a powerhouse.

Does anyone else find it odd when your stuff comes back after an edit? I read it and i'm like 'that's what I wrote, but better...but not different... but different"

I'm rambling.

Anywho...all feedback is greatly appreciated!

If anyone wants to chat about writing just message me through the feedback thing, my Pm's are off.

https://www.literotica.com/s/sex-sla...ormous-problem

Last edited by Princess_Red : 07-13-2017 at 02:00 PM. Reason: link added
  Reply With Quote

Old 07-17-2017, 09:24 AM   #3340
MaxwellSpanx
Virgin
 
MaxwellSpanx is online now
Join Date: Feb 2014
Location: London
Posts: 21
Here is my latest story. It's a hot Loving Wives Tale but with a subtle undercurrent of humour. Deena is a good girl in a bad situation and needs to fuck her way out of it. The whole thing is a good yarn - if I do say so myself

The Choice
https://www.literotica.com/s/the-choice-22

Feel free to get in touch
__________________
MaxwellSpanx
~
Please visit my world of debauchery: https://www.literotica.com/stories/m...ge=submissions
  Reply With Quote

Old 07-18-2017, 11:22 AM   #3341
Ian56
Virgin
 
Ian56 is online now
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: UK
Posts: 1
Hey everyone,

First post on this board! Would just like to say hello to the group and post about my new story uploaded to Literotica. Called "Crazy Little Thing Called SEX" in the Romance section. Basically a romantic first-time erotic story with some shade thrown in. Part 2 is already available to check out with Part 3 currently under review.


https://www.literotica.com/s/crazy-l...lled-sex-pt-01
  Reply With Quote

Old 07-22-2017, 11:53 PM   #3342
EnglishTeacher
Virgin
 
EnglishTeacher is offline
Join Date: Aug 2010
Location: Asia
Posts: 28
Chapter 3 of my Whitewash League series is up and live. Enjoy all!

https://www.literotica.com/s/whitewash-league-ch-03
__________________
Interested in White Male/Other Female interracial? Into Superheroines and harems? Stop by and browse my stories.

Like my work? Support me on Patreon.
  Reply With Quote

Old 07-23-2017, 08:56 PM   #3343
richman3
Experienced
 
richman3 is offline
Join Date: Aug 2016
Location: somewhere
Posts: 75
Cross Country Taboo Part 3

Please check out part 3 of my "Cross Country Taboo" series. Enjoy.

richman3

https://www.literotica.com/s/cross-country-taboo-ch-03
  Reply With Quote

Old Yesterday, 02:38 PM   #3344
CiaoSteve
Virgin
 
CiaoSteve is offline
Join Date: Mar 2015
Location: UK
Posts: 8
Dabbling with Non-Human Tales

Welcome you taking a look at "Destined to Keep Cumming" a tale of a young girl's sexual encounter with a modern day vampire and the consequences it brings.

https://www.literotica.com/s/destined-to-keep-cumming

Published as a stand alone but may add extra chapters if people enjoy the story. Never done Non-Human before so not sure if it hits the mark or not. Would welcome your thoughts.
  Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 09:03 AM.

Copyright 1998-2013 Literotica Online. Literotica is a registered trademark.