Recently started writing a lesbian fiction between a dominant, forceful, handsome, strident woman and a submissive, awkward, but beautiful redhead.
Part 1
https://www.literotica.com/s/all-mine-8
Part 2
https://www.literotica.com/s/all-mine-ch-02-killing-her-softly
I've gotten positive reviews thus far. Mostly it's people asking for more or cursing my immortal soul for making the parts too short for their liking. Can I get a critique?
Part 1
https://www.literotica.com/s/all-mine-8
Part 2
https://www.literotica.com/s/all-mine-ch-02-killing-her-softly
I've gotten positive reviews thus far. Mostly it's people asking for more or cursing my immortal soul for making the parts too short for their liking. Can I get a critique?
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