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Old 07-31-2017, 07:39 PM   #1
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Arrow Looking for Beta Reader (Medieval Setting/Sci-Fi/Action/Adventure)

I want someone to look at a 3000 word draft for a story I'm working on. Setting is Science fiction/fantasy world written in first person, present tense.

It's basically just a prologue and a swordfight. Well, not really a swordfight, just a fight involving swords.

It feels terribly off to me and I want someone to point out mistakes and/or give me some pointers to make it more interesting.

If you're interested, feel free to post here to contact me in PM.


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Old 08-01-2017, 12:14 PM   #2
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