Feedback wanted on ritualistic incest story
Hi, I'm a long-time reader, first time writer. I'm specifically looking for general content feedback (beta reader) and editing help, especially to meet Literotica stylistic standards.
The story is about a typical American family that practices a secret religion centered around incest. It loosely follows a mixed-race (half-white, half-Asian) college age girl (a daughter), but is narrated in the third-person. The story is around 3,000 words.
Any help would be much appreciated! Thanks!
Last edited by secretlife9 : 07-18-2017 at 10:43 PM.