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Old 07-18-2017, 09:28 PM   #1
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Feedback wanted on ritualistic incest story

Hi, I'm a long-time reader, first time writer. I'm specifically looking for general content feedback (beta reader) and editing help, especially to meet Literotica stylistic standards.

The story is about a typical American family that practices a secret religion centered around incest. It loosely follows a mixed-race (half-white, half-Asian) college age girl (a daughter), but is narrated in the third-person. The story is around 3,000 words.

Any help would be much appreciated! Thanks!

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Old 07-19-2017, 12:24 AM   #2
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I can give it a quick look. Pm me.
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