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I am having a heck of a time wording this so it makes sense.
If you read this can you understand what she's trying to say?
And any suggestions to make it more clear?I wrote it and even I find it confusing!
I look down at Spencer. He’s doing really well sitting in a carseat for never having been in one before. And only because I am sitting right next to him. He looks so little suddenly. I lean over and kiss his head. His curls. His dad’s curls. I don’t know why he is more his dad’s son than his brother, Eddie’s namesake. Eddie is named after his dad and looks the most like him, but Spencer reminds me more of Eddie and I don’t know why.
If you read this can you understand what she's trying to say?
And any suggestions to make it more clear?I wrote it and even I find it confusing!
I look down at Spencer. He’s doing really well sitting in a carseat for never having been in one before. And only because I am sitting right next to him. He looks so little suddenly. I lean over and kiss his head. His curls. His dad’s curls. I don’t know why he is more his dad’s son than his brother, Eddie’s namesake. Eddie is named after his dad and looks the most like him, but Spencer reminds me more of Eddie and I don’t know why.