FrenchMagic
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- Joined
- Oct 29, 2017
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Hello fellow readers and authors, I would be honored (no less ) if you could give a go to my first story here: https://www.literotica.com/s/a-journey-of-new-experiences-ch-01
It is a story categorized in Erotic couplings, which I hope can please both men and women.
Please send me your reviews so I can improve my writing, tell me what you liked, what should be improved ...
Be a tiny bit indulgent because it was my first and I am not a native speaker, but do point out critically important mistakes to help me refine my meager skills lol
Thank you all
It is a story categorized in Erotic couplings, which I hope can please both men and women.
Please send me your reviews so I can improve my writing, tell me what you liked, what should be improved ...
Be a tiny bit indulgent because it was my first and I am not a native speaker, but do point out critically important mistakes to help me refine my meager skills lol
Thank you all