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Old 07-20-2016, 03:40 PM   #1
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[800 Words] Beta Reader 4 Short Story Needed, Editing Help Appreciated.

Was inspired by the following prompt and would like some help with beta-reading/editing a short ~800 word story. PM if able to help out.

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Pretty experimental. The 1st-person POV is not a person but the fuck itself, telling of its experience from the inside. I'm reminded of a hentai illo showing cunnilingus as viewed from within, at her cervix looking out at the slurping tongue. How might A FUCK'S TALE go?
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Old 07-20-2016, 03:54 PM   #2
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This is a better place to ask that question: http://forum.literotica.com/showthre...1161443&page=2
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Old 07-20-2016, 04:04 PM   #3
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This is a better place to ask that question: http://forum.literotica.com/showthre...1161443&page=2
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