butterflyjamie84
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I have written a story involving a crossdressing man who is magically turned into a woman and the sex-capades that follow along with some of the emotional toil of being removed from family.
I am looking for an editor to look at the grammar and the punctuation but I am also looking for a female to help me with some critique of the physical descriptions of things like how it feels to have the weight of breasts on her chest...the way it feels to be touched, and vaginal intercourse.
I am looking for a female due to the very descriptive nature of the story and would like it to be as physically accurate as possible.
If a male would like to read it and help with the grammar that would be fine, but I still would like a females POV.
the story is roughly 20pgs in MSWord.
Thank you
I am looking for an editor to look at the grammar and the punctuation but I am also looking for a female to help me with some critique of the physical descriptions of things like how it feels to have the weight of breasts on her chest...the way it feels to be touched, and vaginal intercourse.
I am looking for a female due to the very descriptive nature of the story and would like it to be as physically accurate as possible.
If a male would like to read it and help with the grammar that would be fine, but I still would like a females POV.
the story is roughly 20pgs in MSWord.
Thank you
