KelvinBlack
Kelvin Black Author
- Joined
- Feb 10, 2018
- Posts
- 34
Morning all.
I've written the first draft of a multiple partner story (threesome), and with this one I chose to write each main section from a different viewpoint.
For example: the woman sits down in a bar and notices a nice looking guy smiling at her > the guy thinks the woman is hot, smiles, and decides to go and talk to her > the husband watches the couple talking together from across the room... and so on.
The entire story moves along this way, with each section being described in first person perspective, from the different viewpoint.
It also tends to follow the pattern of woman > lover > husband who is speaking.
Has anybody else tried to do something similar?
I understand that changing the viewpoint through the story would usually cause confusion for the reader, but this seems to work well for me.
Any thoughts please gratefully received!
Cheers - K.
I've written the first draft of a multiple partner story (threesome), and with this one I chose to write each main section from a different viewpoint.
For example: the woman sits down in a bar and notices a nice looking guy smiling at her > the guy thinks the woman is hot, smiles, and decides to go and talk to her > the husband watches the couple talking together from across the room... and so on.
The entire story moves along this way, with each section being described in first person perspective, from the different viewpoint.
It also tends to follow the pattern of woman > lover > husband who is speaking.
Has anybody else tried to do something similar?
I understand that changing the viewpoint through the story would usually cause confusion for the reader, but this seems to work well for me.
Any thoughts please gratefully received!
Cheers - K.