Old 09-03-2013, 12:44 PM   #107901
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Old 09-03-2013, 01:26 PM   #107902
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Old 09-03-2013, 02:00 PM   #107903
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Old 09-03-2013, 03:04 PM   #107904
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SAE 5-15W works even better for year round use and high speed reels.
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Old 09-03-2013, 05:36 PM   #107905
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Now that's what I call 'useful information'.
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Old 09-03-2013, 08:21 PM   #107906
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Do you know what is NOT a good feeling? When you are at your 4th doctor's visit and 3rd doctor, and you know she is taking a best guess. And when you ask her, "What about the fever? What could be causing that?" And she looks you dead in the eye and say, "I don't know."

Awesome. If what's been causing me to feel this ill for a month really turns out to be acid reflux, I am going to ... post a picture here of myself nude and leave it up for ... 30 minutes!
 

Old 09-04-2013, 11:18 AM   #107907
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I don't like how this last scene transitions into the next one.

I don't like how many characters I have to introduce, let alone keep track of (close to 90).

I might be trying to squeeze too much action into a 12 hour period of time... (the whole story takes place over 24 hours, but the first night is mostly wasted)

I could easily change any of these variables at any time, seeing as how I am only two sex scenes in (two sex scenes plus some oral and fooling around, ok, maybe it's five sex scenes in ), and have only introduced around 30 characters so far.
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Old 09-04-2013, 11:35 AM   #107908
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Do you know what is NOT a good feeling? When you are at your 4th doctor's visit and 3rd doctor, and you know she is taking a best guess. And when you ask her, "What about the fever? What could be causing that?" And she looks you dead in the eye and say, "I don't know."

Awesome. If what's been causing me to feel this ill for a month really turns out to be acid reflux, I am going to ... post a picture here of myself nude and leave it up for ... 30 minutes!
well do it at a time convenient for all of us, please.
Acid Reflux ? Try Gaviscon.
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Old 09-05-2013, 10:58 AM   #107910
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Old 09-05-2013, 11:03 AM   #107911
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Do you know what is NOT a good feeling? When you are at your 4th doctor's visit and 3rd doctor, and you know she is taking a best guess. And when you ask her, "What about the fever? What could be causing that?" And she looks you dead in the eye and say, "I don't know."

Awesome. If what's been causing me to feel this ill for a month really turns out to be acid reflux, I am going to ... post a picture here of myself nude and leave it up for ... 30 minutes!
Note to self: Check this thread every 25 minutes.
 

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I don't like how this last scene transitions into the next one.

I don't like how many characters I have to introduce, let alone keep track of (close to 90).

I might be trying to squeeze too much action into a 12 hour period of time... (the whole story takes place over 24 hours, but the first night is mostly wasted)

I could easily change any of these variables at any time, seeing as how I am only two sex scenes in (two sex scenes plus some oral and fooling around, ok, maybe it's five sex scenes in ), and have only introduced around 30 characters so far.
30 characters. 5 (at most) sex scenes. Less than 12 hours.

I like this story already.
 

Old 09-05-2013, 11:12 AM   #107913
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30 characters. 5 (at most) sex scenes. Less than 12 hours.

I like this story already.
While I have introduced 30 characters, only 9 of them have been involved in any real sexual acts so far. I need to pick up the pace in the next couple of hours, even though around 1/3 of the characters are virgins...
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I should probably mention that it starts off as an incest story, and that I probably won't be finished with it for another five or ten years...
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Old 09-06-2013, 11:51 AM   #107916
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Old 09-06-2013, 03:04 PM   #107917
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Old 09-06-2013, 03:21 PM   #107918
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Only several?

I have a few more stalled ones than 'several'. I know the endings because thinking of the ending is the first stage in starting my story. It is the development and transition from the start to the ending that causes me problems.

The characters decide to go off somewhere else, or the plot develops subplots that need resolution, or the whole thing becomes a convoluted mess.
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Only several?

I have a few more stalled ones than 'several'. I know the endings because thinking of the ending is the first stage in starting my story. It is the development and transition from the start to the ending that causes me problems.

The characters decide to go off somewhere else, or the plot develops subplots that need resolution, or the whole thing becomes a convoluted mess.
I know how most of my stories end. I just can't seem to write everything that leads up to the ending
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"Oiling your reels".

You guys come up with the most interesting euphemisms for things.
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"Oiling your reels".

You guys come up with the most interesting euphemisms for things.
Well, in this case its nothing less than the truth, but I do like your thought. . .


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