Maria_McGeorge
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So, I woke up this morning with the nagging question, what was the point?
I recently posted up a story, and I am pleased with how it has been rated.
But, it took a lot of valuable time and effort to write and edit edit. I even invested in premium Grammerly in order to nail persistent Grammar issues. I'm not sure why I bothered.
The only answer I can come up with is the need to improve, to become a better writer. I guess that is where you guys come in, so I guess I would be interested in what you guys think of my writing, are there any obvious problems I can work on in future.
Just to note I recently read Stephen King's "On Writing" and tried to apply the following of his rules to my work.
Anyway, I feel as if I am really exposing myself (I realize the irony of this given my story subject), but if I don't put myself out there I'll never get any better as a writer.
https://www.literotica.com/s/lady-carmens-fantasies
Thank you for your time.
MM
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I recently posted up a story, and I am pleased with how it has been rated.
But, it took a lot of valuable time and effort to write and edit edit. I even invested in premium Grammerly in order to nail persistent Grammar issues. I'm not sure why I bothered.
The only answer I can come up with is the need to improve, to become a better writer. I guess that is where you guys come in, so I guess I would be interested in what you guys think of my writing, are there any obvious problems I can work on in future.
Just to note I recently read Stephen King's "On Writing" and tried to apply the following of his rules to my work.
- I reduced the 1st Draft by 10% to get to the 2nd draft.
- I deleted almost all of the adverbs I could find
- I removed all of the passive voice I could find
- I tried to edit out excessive back story, using it just to inform myself as to how my lead character would behave.
Anyway, I feel as if I am really exposing myself (I realize the irony of this given my story subject), but if I don't put myself out there I'll never get any better as a writer.
https://www.literotica.com/s/lady-carmens-fantasies
Thank you for your time.
MM
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