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Old 04-11-2014, 11:58 PM   #851
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Old 04-12-2014, 12:00 AM   #852
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Old 04-13-2014, 09:28 AM   #853
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Old 04-13-2014, 11:03 AM   #854
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Old 04-13-2014, 02:37 PM   #855
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Old 04-13-2014, 03:36 PM   #856
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Old 04-13-2014, 04:18 PM   #857
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Old 04-13-2014, 04:23 PM   #858
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Old 04-13-2014, 04:57 PM   #859
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They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
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Old 04-13-2014, 06:00 PM   #860
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Old 04-13-2014, 06:02 PM   #861
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Old 04-13-2014, 06:08 PM   #862
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Old 04-13-2014, 06:13 PM   #863
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Old 04-13-2014, 06:33 PM   #864
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Old 04-13-2014, 07:28 PM   #866
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Blessed are the cracked for it is they that let in the light
They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Old 04-15-2014, 06:42 PM   #867
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Old 04-15-2014, 06:47 PM   #868
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Old 04-15-2014, 06:59 PM   #869
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Old 04-16-2014, 05:41 PM   #870
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Old 04-16-2014, 06:46 PM   #871
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Old Yesterday, 03:39 PM   #872
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Old Yesterday, 11:04 PM   #875
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