XXplorher
Literotica Guru
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Oh god. I floated. There was that pure, perfect second of oblivion, like that moment of timelessness after you jump, before gravity takes control. That one sweet moment of freedom.
Sublime. Exhilarating. Eternal. Heaven.
(Excerpt from The Ride)
Excellent! The tempo leading up to the big O was superior, and then you held it there very nicely. Definitely one of the better descriptions of that moment I have read here. You were able to paint her mentality, and delivered a nice crescendo.
Let’s see some more, eh…..
Oh god. I floated. There was that pure, perfect second of oblivion, like that moment of timelessness after you jump, before gravity takes control. That one sweet moment of freedom.
Sublime. Exhilarating. Eternal. Heaven.
(Excerpt from The Ride)
Excellent! The tempo leading up to the big O was superior, and then you held it there very nicely. Definitely one of the better descriptions of that moment I have read here. You were able to paint her mentality, and delivered a nice crescendo.
Let’s see some more, eh…..