LeBroz
Let the mind roam free
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Saturday's Review
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Art seems to be AWOL of late and today's listing of 11 poems have too many to overlook, so here goes.
RedHairedandFriendly starts us off with a very short piece in Planted. You play, the drugstore test comes back +.
darkmaas gives us a really naughty piece in Theology of Ardor. Reminds me of a good catholic girl I knew; approaching thirty and frequently dressed in an outfit that looked so much like a catholic school girl's uniform. Everyone knew she was good and some knew even better how very, very good she was to men and women. As the man said, ever exploring the full range of original sin...
darkitude again explores the risks and consequences of submission in By the time I get to Phoenix. It's a rather good piece, though it could use some trimming. The comments she's already received should give her some matters to consider.
WomanPariah is at it again with her Journey-Loves Remain. She weaves her magic in her complex word patterns — a tough read when done so early on a Saturday morning. Mercy!
ElmerGlew is at it again with one of his short, tightly written poems in arson. You'll have to decide for yourself if this is about a love so hot it burns or her fiery words burning through your heart in a break-up.
KOLKORE gives us a very sweet and moving piece in The chicken with the golden comb. If this one doesn't move you, you must be dead.
And finally, my absolute favorite of the day for very personal reasons comes to us from Curiouswife. Goodbye my.... For me, she was more than a friend but never {damn} a lover; her memory lifts my soul still and perhaps one day our paths will cross again.
That's it for today. A broad selection to pick through. Enjoy!
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Art seems to be AWOL of late and today's listing of 11 poems have too many to overlook, so here goes.
RedHairedandFriendly starts us off with a very short piece in Planted. You play, the drugstore test comes back +.
darkmaas gives us a really naughty piece in Theology of Ardor. Reminds me of a good catholic girl I knew; approaching thirty and frequently dressed in an outfit that looked so much like a catholic school girl's uniform. Everyone knew she was good and some knew even better how very, very good she was to men and women. As the man said, ever exploring the full range of original sin...
darkitude again explores the risks and consequences of submission in By the time I get to Phoenix. It's a rather good piece, though it could use some trimming. The comments she's already received should give her some matters to consider.
WomanPariah is at it again with her Journey-Loves Remain. She weaves her magic in her complex word patterns — a tough read when done so early on a Saturday morning. Mercy!
ElmerGlew is at it again with one of his short, tightly written poems in arson. You'll have to decide for yourself if this is about a love so hot it burns or her fiery words burning through your heart in a break-up.
KOLKORE gives us a very sweet and moving piece in The chicken with the golden comb. If this one doesn't move you, you must be dead.
And finally, my absolute favorite of the day for very personal reasons comes to us from Curiouswife. Goodbye my.... For me, she was more than a friend but never {damn} a lover; her memory lifts my soul still and perhaps one day our paths will cross again.
That's it for today. A broad selection to pick through. Enjoy!
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