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Old 03-21-2008, 02:11 PM   #1
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Ogg's 50 Word Story Challenge

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The lights dimmed; the orchestra played, Ben embraced Martha, caressing her back and ass. She closed her eyes, surrendering to the alcohol and music and his dick pressed against her belly. Her nipples blossomed; she tongued his ear; Cupid’s dew collected on her panties.
“Everyone is looking.”
“Fuck them.”

I found OGG's article about writing 50 word stories. A nice challenge.

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Martha was in the bathroom when Ben awoke. He saw her image in the mirror, dressed in sheer red panties with a matching bra. He couldn't see her nipples but tried. He pretended to be asleep when he realized he might get caught looking. She made him hard.

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Old 03-21-2008, 02:30 PM   #2
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I may try it later.

Here's another fun challenge that went on for a bit.
Flashfic thread: Rotating themes
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Old 03-21-2008, 02:36 PM   #3
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Well done, James.

I didn't originate the idea of 50-word stories but I was one of the first to use them on Literotica. You need fifteen of them in one post to meet Lit's 750 word minimum or you could post them as poetry.

For those who haven't read my prize-winning How-To: How To Write a Fifty-Word Story

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It's like [oggbashan] is writing for the third puffin over there by the sixth rock, when everyone else is an emperor penguin in the Antarctic, where there's tens of thousands of the bastards.
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Old 03-21-2008, 02:37 PM   #4
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I think I came aboard about the time the flash fiction fad ended.
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Old 03-21-2008, 02:41 PM   #5
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I like prose compression. The words are forced to do the work.
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Old 03-21-2008, 02:44 PM   #6
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I have several 15 x 50-word sets in my list of submissions.

I think one of my Christmas ones is probably best: Pensive Fifties

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It's like [oggbashan] is writing for the third puffin over there by the sixth rock, when everyone else is an emperor penguin in the Antarctic, where there's tens of thousands of the bastards.
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Old 03-21-2008, 03:55 PM   #7
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Perhaps, the last entry was in 12/07.
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Old 03-21-2008, 05:44 PM   #8
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It was a dark and stormy night.

"Im fucked, muttered Bruce Decker, rogue meteorologist. Bad enough to have predicted clear skies; his assertion that it wouldn't get dark tonight would make Decker a laughing stock.

The phone rang. Storm Center Ten. It was ringing when Decker vanished into the deluge.
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Old 03-21-2008, 05:47 PM   #9
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It was a dark and stormy night.

"Im fucked, muttered Bruce Decker, rogue meteorologist. Bad enough to have predicted clear skies; his assertion that it wouldn't get dark tonight would make Decker a laughing stock.

The phone rang. Storm Center Ten. It was ringing when Decker vanished into the deluge.
That made my panties fill with Cupid's dew.
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Old 03-21-2008, 05:57 PM   #10
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Erika pushed Monica against the wall; Monica offered no resistence. Monica's dark hair fell across her face in long beautiful dark waves as her left leg cocked up and wrapped around Erika's hips. She wore no panties. Erika fingered her until Monica came with a beautiful sigh. Night fell.
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Old 03-21-2008, 06:41 PM   #11
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Five years and a half world away. Derek Bruce had predicted bitter cold, but guaranteed absolutely no snow. Now, if he hurried, he could stay ahead of the blizzard and lose himself and start over. Again. As he drove in familiar shame, the radio reported the city was shut down.
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Old 03-21-2008, 06:53 PM   #12
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The window vibrated with the clap of thunder from overhead as the deluge of water poured from the sky. Watching the cold wet drops hit the window Michelle had the feeling of depressed resignation that comes with a winter thunderstorm. If only John would take her mind off of her depression.


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Old 03-21-2008, 06:58 PM   #13
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Pulling down her panties was when he noticed the birthmark, obscured by the flaming colour of the thick hair. Pushing his tongue between her nether lips it caught his eye again and distracted him enough that he didn't hear the sudden cessation of her soft moans.

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Old 03-21-2008, 07:29 PM   #14
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Pulling down her panties was when he noticed the birthmark, obscured by the flaming colour of the thick hair. Pushing his tongue between her nether lips it caught his eye again and distracted him enough that he didn't hear the sudden cessation of her soft moans.

"Whose your Daddy again?"
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Old 03-21-2008, 07:45 PM   #15
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Thought I'd try my hand at this:

Micah kissed Evelyn hard; she returned his kiss with equal intensity. She wanted this; they both wanted this. As thought gave way to lust, they tore each other’s clothes off, and Micah threw Evelyn on the bed. They fucked wildly, kicking the sheets off in sweaty ecstasy. Darkness fell outside.

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Old 03-21-2008, 07:50 PM   #16
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They were certain they would never see each other again. Sascha reeled back in surprise when she saw Kenneth, and her eyes filled with tears. They ran towards each other and embraced, and Sascha’s tears overflowed, for now was truly the last time they would ever, could ever, be together.
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Old 03-21-2008, 08:22 PM   #17
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"It's Vernal Equinox."

"Tell him I'm not here."

"He'll come back until you give him what's his."

"Don't you get it, Delores? I didn’t hide those eggs. I ate them!"

She went pale. "The Peeps, then. At least return Vernal's Peeps."

Peter's ears drooped. "Let him choke on them."
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Old 03-21-2008, 08:40 PM   #18
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"It's Vernal Equinox."

"Tell him I'm not here."

"He'll come back until you give him what's his."

"Don't you get it, Delores? I didn’t hide those eggs. I ate them!"

She went pale. "The Peeps, then. At least return Vernal's Peeps."

Peter's ears drooped. "Let him choke on them."
This (not this example, the exercise) is really difficult hoping that the reader 'gets' all the implications and the bits that are only there if you make the right connections

ETA ><gasp>< shock, horror shereads actually wrote something.
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This (not this example, the exercise) is really difficult hoping that the reader 'gets' all the implications and the bits that are only there if you make the right connections

ETA ><gasp>< shock, horror shereads actually wrote something.
Now I have to keep coming back to check my story scores.
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She lit the candle and said a prayer, bowed, crossed herself, and walked to the back of the church. The hooker was waiting; lying down with her skirt up and her legs spread on the pew. The devotee muttered a Latin prayer as she began going down. It was beautiful.
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Old 03-21-2008, 09:14 PM   #21
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She shuddered as she saw the letter waiting on the mat - thick and ominous it was just like all the others he had sent. Hesitating briefly, she picked it up and opened the door to put it in the trash like the rest.
Cold hands closed round her throat,
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Old 03-21-2008, 10:09 PM   #22
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Janie freed Tonys hard cock from his loose fitting jeans, and slid her mouth around the head. He assured her he could drive while she sucked him. As the police officer took his statement, Tony watched Janie lick her lips with a grin. Tony realized he had under-estimated her prowess.
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Once the house was empty, the dust settled, she collapsed on the couch and sobbed. It only last a few minutes, but it came from her soul and rattled the panes in the windows. Her companion just covered her hand with his, and waited. She was letting go, starting now.
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Dante staggered out and sank to his knees on the grass. "Unbelievable."

Virgil dusted off his wings. "So. What did you think?"

Dante cast his eyes skyward. "Never in my wildest imaginings did I suspect the true terrors of Hell."

Virgil stiffened. "I was supposed to show you Hell first?"
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Erika pushed Monica against the wall; Monica offered no resistence. Monica's dark hair fell across her face in long beautiful dark waves as her left leg cocked up and wrapped around Erika's hips. She wore no panties. Erika fingered her until Monica came with a beautiful sigh. Night fell.
Yeah. That was hot. I'm going to have to try this. The fifty word thing, not the above scene. At least, not any time soon.
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