Nerdy chick seeks editor

sure i've written a ton in that category... pm me if you want
 
I read "My Daddy - the Spy." Readers obviously like it. It has a 4+ rating, but if you want some advice. my basic would be from Mark Twain: "Don't say the woman screamed; bring her on and let her scream." That is, you're a bit too heavy on telling about what happened rather than having it happen. More dialogue can help set the "reality" of the story. If you want to talk any more about it, feel free to PM me.
 
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