I would like to find an editor to peruse my (as of now) 7 paragraph story titled,
Want Ad: Sub/Slave/Heterosexual/Husband/Maid
I would like to know if this story is interesting enough to continue with.
Not a novel certainly but perhaps a novella, or long story.
English, spell checked, and grammar checked (although had a couple problems with passive voice that I don't understand).
I have a few more paragraphs in mind but as yet unwritten (his secret, my secret, the wedding night etc.).
I have to tell you, I have attempted to publish this story several times. First time I believe story was to short (only sent half), the second story was not proofed. The reason for doing so? I was having a lot of trouble getting the site to work (my logons were not working anywhere but member page. So I thought I would submit story with a note and get help. That didn't happen. Now things seem to be up and running and I sure would like some help.