"...and then Mom walked in."

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Could be the inciting moment of many incest tales, but I especially love daddy daughter tales where Mom joins in, would love to see more.
 
I've been thinking of writing an incest story where twin brothers are caught by mom.

Then as they explain that they are bi rather than gay she ends up joining them and gatting double penetrated.

Needs more than that of course for a story. Are the boys dating each other, do they have girl/boyfriend(s), was this their first time, does the mother immediately jump in or does it take a while, do they boys seduce her or does she seduce the boys, does she try to seduce the boys because she is more apalled at them being gay (she thinks) than the incest and the boys just play along...

There are plenty of ways to handle the story. Unfortunately I'm not good enough to write a long story.
 
I've been thinking of writing an incest story where twin brothers are caught by mom.

Then as they explain that they are bi rather than gay she ends up joining them and gatting double penetrated.

Needs more than that of course for a story. Are the boys dating each other, do they have girl/boyfriend(s), was this their first time, does the mother immediately jump in or does it take a while, do they boys seduce her or does she seduce the boys, does she try to seduce the boys because she is more apalled at them being gay (she thinks) than the incest and the boys just play along...

There are plenty of ways to handle the story. Unfortunately I'm not good enough to write a long story.

does not have to be long. Jump in right where Mom enters. Do the back story in a couple of paras, then the main action, as you picture it. Personally in a short version I'd have Mom's nipples harden as she notices the size of her boys semi-hard cocks, wonder how big they really get, ask if she can touch them. Then off to the races.

Of course my particular perversion requires daughter to find out in sequel, so dad can do daughter.
 
Sure I could make it short and sweet...

But there are a few things:

a) I want a bit of realism for this story (even if it is just a bit.) Mom getting over her shock immediately jumping into the bed is not what I have in mind.

b) Taking things slower also allows for having the sons seduce the mother slowly and focusing on her inner thoughts as she goes from shock to arousal and struggles with her feelings for a while. I really do like the "this is wrong but just thinking about it turns me on" internal conflict as a person comes to grasps with being attracted to a family member or several in this case.

This just means that the eventual climax has more buildup leading towards it.
 
I think I have a new story that kind of fits in with your idea. The son and mom have separate sex lives and they slowly collide to the mom's initial disliking
 
Saw a cartoon again recently. Mom walks in on Sonny jerking-off. She berates him: "God is watching you!" They hear a noise at the window and find {JHWH} peering in. Mom yells about what a perv He is and she's gonna call the cops.

Could have many variants. Mom walks in whilst Sonny is sexually engaged with:

* A blowup doll.
* A talking / magical (because LIT) goat or sheep.
* One or more siblings or other kin.
* One or more folks of widely divergent classes / ethnicities / genders.
* One or more demons, succubi, pixies, ogres, yeti, etc.
* Local authority figure: politician, pastor, provost.
* Grandma.
 
I think I have a new story that kind of fits in with your idea. The son and mom have separate sex lives and they slowly collide to the mom's initial disliking

sounds interesting, though as noted in OP, oddly for the title I am not looking for focus on Mom/son, which seldom works for me.
 
Could be the inciting moment of many incest tales, but I especially love daddy daughter tales where Mom joins in, would love to see more.

What if mom overhears a conversation between daughter and BF. He loves her but she just isn't good at sucking his cock. He tells her that if she doesn't learn how to do it better he is going to dump her.

Mom thinks that he is s jerk but realizes that if something doesn't change her daughter will have the same problem with other guys.

She enters the room and surprises them. They are half naked and try to cover up but mom stops them and tells them that she heard their conversation. She offers that she knows how to solve their problem.

She walks over to the BF and starts sucking his cock and tells her daughter to watch. They take turns as she teaches her. After making him fun mom says that she will need practice and tells BF to come back tomorrow.
 
What if mom overhears a conversation between daughter and BF. He loves her but she just isn't good at sucking his cock. He tells her that if she doesn't learn how to do it better he is going to dump her.

Mom thinks that he is s jerk but realizes that if something doesn't change her daughter will have the same problem with other guys.

She enters the room and surprises them. They are half naked and try to cover up but mom stops them and tells them that she heard their conversation. She offers that she knows how to solve their problem.

She walks over to the BF and starts sucking his cock and tells her daughter to watch. They take turns as she teaches her. After making him fun mom says that she will need practice and tells BF to come back tomorrow.
Ok, that is a pretty hot idea, and I would totally read that one. (I had an older friend teach me to give a hummer, but on a popcicle.)

*waves to Sirhugs* :rose:
 
What if mom overhears a conversation between daughter and BF. He loves her but she just isn't good at sucking his cock. He tells her that if she doesn't learn how to do it better he is going to dump her.

Mom thinks that he is s jerk but realizes that if something doesn't change her daughter will have the same problem with other guys.

She enters the room and surprises them. They are half naked and try to cover up but mom stops them and tells them that she heard their conversation. She offers that she knows how to solve their problem.

She walks over to the BF and starts sucking his cock and tells her daughter to watch. They take turns as she teaches her. After making him fun mom says that she will need practice and tells BF to come back tomorrow.

There are like 100 porno films with the concept "(step)mom walks in and sees daughter and BF having awkward sex and decides to give them a lesson."

"Daughter is bad at giving blowjobs" is one of the more common specific starting points.

Honestly though, it's not a bad way to start the story. It gives a semi-plausible reason for a mom to interfere in something like this if she wants the couple to be together.
 
There are like 100 porno films with the concept "(step)mom walks in and sees daughter and BF having awkward sex and decides to give them a lesson."

"Daughter is bad at giving blowjobs" is one of the more common specific starting points.

Honestly though, it's not a bad way to start the story. It gives a semi-plausible reason for a mom to interfere in something like this if she wants the couple to be together.

Agreed, it is a common porno trope. What's great about Lit is that where porn movies usually stop trying with the plot at that point a good story must continue. This is just meant to be a somewhat plausible way to connect the characters. I think the real fun happens later in the story.

There are so many other lessons that she needs to teach her daughter too...
 
Written erotica can also take things a lot slower.

Rather than having the mom jump into the bed with her child and their lover she can instead wait for a time when she can talk to her daughter alone. Maybe start by giving her some tips on how to have sex. Perhaps when she is still too nervous mom offers to make a demonstration with a dildo and the two are a bit more aroused by their practise session than they dare admit. Later on they practise kissing together and other things as well, always taking things a step too far.

The BF soon notices how the daughter is doing much better but he has no idea how she learned her skills, but at some point he jokingly admits that he thinks her girlfriends mother is hot and the daughter thinks of the perfect way to not only thank her mom for help but also spice up their sex life... Surprise threesome.
 
Written erotica can also take things a lot slower.

Rather than having the mom jump into the bed with her child and their lover she can instead wait for a time when she can talk to her daughter alone. Maybe start by giving her some tips on how to have sex. Perhaps when she is still too nervous mom offers to make a demonstration with a dildo and the two are a bit more aroused by their practise session than they dare admit. Later on they practise kissing together and other things as well, always taking things a step too far.

The BF soon notices how the daughter is doing much better but he has no idea how she learned her skills, but at some point he jokingly admits that he thinks her girlfriends mother is hot and the daughter thinks of the perfect way to not only thank her mom for help but also spice up their sex life... Surprise threesome.

I like this version, though still hope that Dad gets some. :D
 
That could be an interesting twist. They use either brother or father as a test subject for mom to help daughter practice her new skills.

Or Dad could walk in as Mom demonstrates on daughter's bf...
 
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