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It needs an edit and a bit more rounding out to make it shine. And yeah, stranger me todski, like a masculine anima.
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It needs an edit and a bit more rounding out to make it shine. And yeah, stranger me todski, like a masculine anima.
Are we taking poetry right up the chute, now?
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Are you bending over, darling? I promise to kiss you.
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Ooh, Champagne! I really like the sounds and phrasing in today's 3-26 post.
Almost makes me want to
you. 
Almost makes me want to
you. Interesting the way you changed things up between sexual tempest with the boys and slow seductress with the girls there champ, the juxtaposition and contarst between the two speaks volumes about what men offer and what women offer
Still trying to give your male animus perspective the justice it deserves I'm hoping I get there
Still trying to give your male animus perspective the justice it deserves I'm hoping I get there
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Well, girls are a slow burn for the most and need a gentle approach... (unless they're the woman in the Feminine Animus -- you need to be a Masculine Anima btw)Interesting the way you changed things up between sexual tempest with the boys and slow seductress with the girls there champ, the juxtaposition and contarst between the two speaks volumes about what men offer and what women offer
Still trying to give your male animus perspective the justice it deserves I'm hoping I get there
Taken from Wikipedia:
The anima and animus are described by Jung as elements of his theory of the collective unconscious, a domain of the unconscious that transcends the personal psyche. In the unconscious of the male, this archetype finds expression as a feminine inner personality: anima; equivalently, in the unconscious of the female it is expressed as a masculine inner personality: animus.
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If Jessica Rabbit were a real girl, and not so pre-disposed to "hare"-raising, then she'd be a GILK.. mwah!Ooh, Champagne! I really like the sounds and phrasing in today's 3-26 post.
Almost makes me want to
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You see now my struggle!!
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Champagne, i really liked your "denial" but i liked it even better when i ignored all 4 ~i really want to hears~
The message was already clear, and i didn't like pausing to catch my breath. I liked it as a rush.
Good either way.
The message was already clear, and i didn't like pausing to catch my breath. I liked it as a rush.
Good either way.
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The repetitions are a requirement of the villanelle. A terzanelle is a little easier to instill some original lines, but the villanelle means L1 and L3 of the first verse are repeated, sometimes ad nauseum. Thank you though. I believe it needs a lot of work. Good thing the 30 edits in 30 days exists, nu?
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Thanks gf.
You've lost not a whit of your touch. I'm liking it all--the M. Cezanne, especially. We should both be putting chapooks together!
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you can always start another when you have the inclinationCouldn't finish. Had a busy, but memorable, weekend.
Loved what you posted up to your busy weekend
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you can always start another when you have the inclination
Ditto this and congrats on the happy weekend.
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Thank you, Mz Catch....
Have been enjoying both the reading and the occasional inspiration from your latest run. Sometimes, I don't think I ever make it through these things without sufficient input from others also writing parallel to myself (either in 30 in 30 or elsewhere in the forum).
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*flexes
Getting
ready to do THIS
New Year's day.
Getting
ready to do THIS
New Year's day.
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