Hi all,
I just had my first 'real' story posted (I have another one up, too, but it was a blitz-write I did that I'm no longer a fan of). I was wondering if I could get some feedback. It's my first real foray into erotic writing, and I'm interested to hear what people think, if you have the time.
http://www.literotica.com/s/cassidy-and-alex-a-love-story
Just fyi, it's a brother/sister story (thought I'd post a warning, since I know some people are skeeved out by such things).
Thanks in advance for taking the time to read it, especially during a busy time like this!
I just had my first 'real' story posted (I have another one up, too, but it was a blitz-write I did that I'm no longer a fan of). I was wondering if I could get some feedback. It's my first real foray into erotic writing, and I'm interested to hear what people think, if you have the time.
http://www.literotica.com/s/cassidy-and-alex-a-love-story
Just fyi, it's a brother/sister story (thought I'd post a warning, since I know some people are skeeved out by such things).
Thanks in advance for taking the time to read it, especially during a busy time like this!