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Old 04-08-2018, 04:24 PM   #576
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Cal Y. Pygia is back on Lit with several new submissions, all of which I think are well written.

I particularly liked "Hard and Solid."

https://www.literotica.com/p/hard-and-solid
Yes, I enjoyed "Hard and Solid." Apparently the author has closed her poem to comments, or I would have left a compliment.
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Old 05-21-2018, 11:26 PM   #577
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a Muslim poetess maketh waves in NPs: her ' Bisexual Muslim boys' , Hijaab Sluts and Muslim gal into Big White Dick are sensational and shd be made must reading for ISIS jihadis and suicide bombers!!!!
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Old 05-30-2018, 11:46 AM   #578
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Helping Hand by erectus123 brings the poem full circle, it's a bit unsettling that line 5 has no rhyme which interrupts what is otherwise a smooth read.
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Old 05-30-2018, 12:10 PM   #579
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Fetish Limericks 12: Pregnancy by randy_miranda is an amusing set of Limericks, well worth the read.
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Blessed are the cracked for it is they that let in the light
They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
Nil Caborundum illigitimi
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Old 08-06-2018, 09:02 AM   #580
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Red face My poems

Not actually recommending them and always meant to post some to lit. This is more depression therapy than anything else but I started a blog of my poems at https://cassidymcgurk.wordpress.com/
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Old 08-10-2018, 03:13 PM   #581
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I try to at least peruse New Poems but usually don’t find any I’d recommend.
“The Girl I Wasn’t” by Carnal Flower I think is worth reading.

https://www.literotica.com/p/the-girl-i-wasnt
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Old 08-26-2018, 02:09 PM   #582
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In “No Small Seduction’” darkmaas gives the reader a well done erotic poem. There is a lot of embroidery here. I had to look up several terms. My impatience usually gets the better of it, and I stop reading. However, that wasn’t the case here:

https://www.literotica.com/p/no-small-seduction
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Old 09-02-2018, 04:32 PM   #583
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Appetites by darkmaas made me smile.
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Old 09-02-2018, 06:58 PM   #584
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Appetites by darkmaas made me smile.

Thank you for the recommendation, Piscator - lovely poem!
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Old 09-02-2018, 07:05 PM   #585
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In “No Small Seduction’” darkmaas gives the reader a well done erotic poem. There is a lot of embroidery here. I had to look up several terms. My impatience usually gets the better of it, and I stop reading. However, that wasn’t the case here:

https://www.literotica.com/p/no-small-seduction
I really enjoyed this one.
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Old 09-14-2018, 08:30 AM   #586
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Ellen More strikes again In Our Room at Pedregal
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