https://www.literotica.com/p/on-the-beach-50
I had a go at my first ‘erotic’ poem recently.
As you will see, it’s about a well hung man seducing a woman on a nudist beach, while her husband watches on.
Would love some feedback. Be as critical as you want, I don’t offend easily.
Hopefully it may turn one or two of you on too!
Fyi it is quite graphic.
I had a go at my first ‘erotic’ poem recently.
As you will see, it’s about a well hung man seducing a woman on a nudist beach, while her husband watches on.
Would love some feedback. Be as critical as you want, I don’t offend easily.
Hopefully it may turn one or two of you on too!
Fyi it is quite graphic.
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