Hello fellow authors.
I'm looking for some constructive feedback. I wrote it a little while ago but I think it's one of my better pieces. Would love to know what you think of it. It's a tale about a a young woman called Semra who is led astray by manager called Monica - a woman who leads an alternative lifestyle.
https://www.literotica.com/s/a-night-out-with-monica
Thanks
I'm looking for some constructive feedback. I wrote it a little while ago but I think it's one of my better pieces. Would love to know what you think of it. It's a tale about a a young woman called Semra who is led astray by manager called Monica - a woman who leads an alternative lifestyle.
https://www.literotica.com/s/a-night-out-with-monica
Thanks