Sorry, it's been a while since I wandered by here. Another great story, Surreal! I do enjoy your narrative style. You bring all the senses into play -- I especially appreciated your descriptions of tastes and smells. Loved your asides: "ladies, don't every underestimate the power of going in for the kiss."
You're a good storyteller, Surreal. You sound relaxed, and you use details effectively. And that inner thigh tease [and the demonstration of a Blow of breath as you cross from thigh to thigh] was inspiring! YUMMM
mmm mmm, such a happy ending for your story... you're a treat to listen to.