thewriterjames
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- Jul 20, 2009
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Hi,
I'm thinking of writing another story(ies) continuing my previous work. That was my first story ever (and I haven't written since) and I would like some feedback on it re what works well, what doesn't, etc. Would someone mind reading and commenting here? I'd really appreciate it!
https://www.literotica.com/s/james-and-mare-a-story-of-love
I'm thinking of writing another story(ies) continuing my previous work. That was my first story ever (and I haven't written since) and I would like some feedback on it re what works well, what doesn't, etc. Would someone mind reading and commenting here? I'd really appreciate it!
https://www.literotica.com/s/james-and-mare-a-story-of-love