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Old 01-11-2015, 10:26 AM   #3076
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New Story up...trying my hand at the Romance angle of things...

Check it out: Stolen Kisses

Side Note: I dropped 2x instances of humor in with the sexy stuff...curious if anyone will pick up on either incident or assume its just stupid dialogue. Gotta have fun with this stuff, right?

Anyhow, enjoy, read, rate, rant and so on por favor.
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Old 01-16-2015, 06:19 PM   #3077
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It's non-erotic, so I doubt it'll get many views, but "Four Little Words" has just been approved by the management. It's a short story about a law professor's poignant final exam for his students, and a reminder that no matter what, we can always learn from our mistakes.



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Old 01-16-2015, 06:29 PM   #3078
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I tried my hand at a simple short story, where a lawyer comes home and her girlfriend helps them both relax. Might lead to more, in the future, but it's a single story for now.


Contains lesbian sex and very light D/s elements.
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Old 01-19-2015, 04:39 PM   #3079
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New story

I posted my first story: Perversion Immersion Therapy. Its my mostly true story about one of my adventures. I appreciate any feedback.

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Old 01-25-2015, 10:24 PM   #3080
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Originally Posted by frostyghost09 View Post
Hello all! This is my first successful story submission, fittingly in the First Time category. It's not really based on anything other than daydreams and personal fantasies. Give it a look if it's your cup of tea

Very nice! Lovely first time!

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My stories feature fitness as flirting and foreplay. (Is that too many f-words? )
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Old 03-01-2015, 10:23 AM   #3081
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A composer falls for his young pupil while the pupil's brother secretly watches, and strongly disapproves of the relationship. Light BDSM and mind control, incestuous themes.

First part of a serial.

Looking for feedback and constructive criticism.

Thank you
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Old 03-02-2015, 02:28 AM   #3082
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A short Non-human series about what would happen if fate brought together two people as mates but one isn't interested.


My first story submission. To be completed soon.
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Old 03-24-2015, 05:54 AM   #3083
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My second story on Lit has gone live (actually a slightly-updated version of a story originally written some time ago at another site).
Miri: Holy Bejeezus, tell me you don't use my Jergen's to whack it.
Zack: No, you know what I do? I light a bunch of candles, and I sprawl out on my sheets, and I listen to Sting. No, I'm a guy. You give me two Popsicle sticks and a rubber band and I'll find a way to fuck it, like a filthy MacGuyver!
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