Testing some 3D for comic

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12 JUN 2014-
Well, I got the first issue up that involves Mia. Its a rough one as its my first and I am curious as to the way people think of it. I got it up on a complete new post but figured ill keep this original page I started a while back updated to everything I do.

I just cant finish this damn thing. Every time I change something, I get another idea and it ends up being a giant loop of me creating, erasing and then creating other ideas.

So I just decided to bite the bullet and release the first thing I ever created, its not pretty and I already know many many graphical and script issues I have in it, but if I didn't release this now, I don't think I ever would get to a finished product. I will just learn from this create a more refined version on the next issue.

Anywho, I hope you enjoy.

Durango.

MIA.pdf
http://www19.zippyshare.com/v/8282849/file.html

I've never uploaded anything, so if there are any issues with downloading let me know please.

23 MAY 2014- look to bottom of post for my last entry, decided to start over from scratch on a new series.

I am new to the 3D scene, I am currently working on making a digital comic series. Here are a few renders of what I am working with right now.
 

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Good stuff. Keep it up. Do you plan on doing all kinds of crazy action angles found in today's comics?
 
Thank you. I do plan to create several different types and with what I'm drafting right now, it will go crazy with certain comics. I've read stories on this site for several years and I go through many of the categories here for what interests me.
 
Here are some more.
 

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here too.
 

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Its funky some of your art makes me think mmmmmm.... Damn! Thats HAWT! Then others pretty much the opposite :) but totally worth checking out
 
Love your work

My only objections are with creations Mia1.jpg and 3.jpg.
In Mia1.jpg the waist seem way too slender. It doesn't seem natural to me. But otherwise its perfect.
3.jpg is a very sexy scene but the womans legs are very masculine. Less muscle on the legs may look more natural.
 
The brunete remind me of Rihanna. I like her a lot.
The white character, is it a man or a woman? Either way, they fit together just fine.
 
This stuff is amazing. Are there any similar stories you got inspired by that we could read as a teaser to what you are working on?
 
Hey great images. You seem to have the females dialed in well. Be aware of proportion. The MIAW12 IMAGE SHE LOOKED GREAT, But i noticed at least for me his hands out out of proportion to the rest of his build. http://imageshack.com/a/img41/2593/ulg7.png The small female her hands seemed un-healthy the musculature seemed she was bony. Just my view great work
 
Well, just an update. I decided to scrap my entire project I was working on, just wasn't feeling it. I decided to start over, you will be seeing Mia in this one though, but shes not taking center stage no more.

I am almost done with the first book, right now its running past 57 pages, but its just chapter 1/prelude. I wanted this book to have actual story than just hot action...will have plenty of that though.

Anywho, the new main girl is Vanessa, she has been in some of my earlier drafts, Ill throw some up here. I expect the first chapter to release early next month after I polish off the comic.

You will be able to tell what genre this will fall under by looking at some of the pages.

http://imageshack.com/a/img836/4569/vewo.jpg

http://imageshack.com/a/img839/9174/ctew.jpg

here are rough drafts of pages from the actual comic.

http://imageshack.com/a/img836/5158/l54g.png

http://imageshack.com/a/img842/6250/zx3n.png

http://imageshack.com/a/img835/2676/p2o0.png

http://imageshack.com/a/img835/845/h3n9.png
 
Nice rebuild

http://imageshack.com/a/img835/2676/p2o0.png

I really enjoyed this image, the lighting was great! Balanced, and she looks wonderful. I think youre on a great move forward looking forward to more. Lighting is tricky and shadows can be over powering, just make a note to give the readers enough that there not left in the dark!
 
Great stuff
Image linking off site gets a better screen size - might try that
 
In all the clothed pictures she looks perfect.
The best by far is the one she is on the ground with her legs high.
In the nude picture though her waist looks unnaturally slim.

Good luck with your book.
 
Well, I got the first issue up that involves Mia. Its a rough one as its my first and I am curious as to the way people think of it. I got it up on a complete new post but figured ill keep this original page I started a while back updated to everything I do.

I just cant finish this damn thing. Every time I change something, I get another idea and it ends up being a giant loop of me creating, erasing and then creating other ideas.

So I just decided to bite the bullet and release the first thing I ever created, its not pretty and I already know many many graphical and script issues I have in it, but if I didn't release this now, I don't think I ever would get to a finished product. I will just learn from this create a more refined version on the next issue.

Anywho, I hope you enjoy.

Durango.

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I've never uploaded anything, so if there are any issues with downloading let me know please.
 
Well, just an update. I decided to scrap my entire project I was working on, just wasn't feeling it. I decided to start over, you will be seeing Mia in this one though, but shes not taking center stage no more.

I am almost done with the first book, right now its running past 57 pages, but its just chapter 1/prelude. I wanted this book to have actual story than just hot action...will have plenty of that though.

Anywho, the new main girl is Vanessa, she has been in some of my earlier drafts, Ill throw some up here. I expect the first chapter to release early next month after I polish off the comic.

You will be able to tell what genre this will fall under by looking at some of the pages.

http://imageshack.com/a/img836/4569/vewo.jpg

http://imageshack.com/a/img839/9174/ctew.jpg

here are rough drafts of pages from the actual comic.

http://imageshack.com/a/img836/5158/l54g.png

http://imageshack.com/a/img842/6250/zx3n.png

http://imageshack.com/a/img835/2676/p2o0.png

http://imageshack.com/a/img835/845/h3n9.png


Great images, really well done.
 
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