CandiCame
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Hey, this is my first post in this thread, and I'm trying to follow all the rules. I feel weird about posting here and begging for feedback, but I want to grow as a writer, and when I posted in the Author's Hangout, that's what everyone advised me to do.
I'm Candicame.
The story is called: Lycan Subscribe. https://www.literotica.com/s/lycan-subscribe
I posted some stories to the site a LONG time ago, but a few days ago I decided to give the Halloween contest a shot- and when I was rereading them, I found that I couldn't get through them. They were THAT bad. That makes me think that my new stuff isn't going to be any better, because I'm out of practice.
I love writing (not just erotic stuff), and would love to improve, but I don't know how. I don't really have the time or money for classes and editors and all that, so I was really hoping you guys might be able to help me.
Oh, I guess I should give a synopsis- the story is about a camboy and his werewolf boyfriend. It's just meant to be cute- like long-term relationship cute, and is set in a world where lycanthropy is, if not common, at least acknowledged as a thing. I'm not really into furry stuff, but I did a little bit of research and I THINK I got the anatomy more or less right.
It's also pretty short so it shouldn't take too long to read?
I don't really know what else I should say. I would just appreciate any help!
I'm Candicame.
The story is called: Lycan Subscribe. https://www.literotica.com/s/lycan-subscribe
I posted some stories to the site a LONG time ago, but a few days ago I decided to give the Halloween contest a shot- and when I was rereading them, I found that I couldn't get through them. They were THAT bad. That makes me think that my new stuff isn't going to be any better, because I'm out of practice.
I love writing (not just erotic stuff), and would love to improve, but I don't know how. I don't really have the time or money for classes and editors and all that, so I was really hoping you guys might be able to help me.
Oh, I guess I should give a synopsis- the story is about a camboy and his werewolf boyfriend. It's just meant to be cute- like long-term relationship cute, and is set in a world where lycanthropy is, if not common, at least acknowledged as a thing. I'm not really into furry stuff, but I did a little bit of research and I THINK I got the anatomy more or less right.
It's also pretty short so it shouldn't take too long to read?
I don't really know what else I should say. I would just appreciate any help!