Bramblethorn
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I'm partway through a series, but I got bitten by a story bug that wouldn't leave me alone until I finished this one-shot:
The Floggings Will Continue.
(Full title would've been "The Floggings Will Continue Until Morale Improves" but that was too long.)
It's an experimental piece and a bit different to my usual fare. I wasn't really sure to put it; it's a mindfuck story with aspects of coercion, and it touches on several categories, but in the end I opted for Exhibitionism/Voyeurism since this seemed to fit best. Still not sure if that was the right choice.
Interested in any feedback, but particularly on the psychological angle. The premise is a bit far-fetched, but within that premise, do the characters' reactions make sense?
The Floggings Will Continue.
(Full title would've been "The Floggings Will Continue Until Morale Improves" but that was too long.)
It's an experimental piece and a bit different to my usual fare. I wasn't really sure to put it; it's a mindfuck story with aspects of coercion, and it touches on several categories, but in the end I opted for Exhibitionism/Voyeurism since this seemed to fit best. Still not sure if that was the right choice.
Interested in any feedback, but particularly on the psychological angle. The premise is a bit far-fetched, but within that premise, do the characters' reactions make sense?