SandraMustard
Literotica GYLF
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I am writing a story in which I want a simple dialogue exchange between an old fortune teller and a young woman. I don't want to insult anyone by misusing simple translation without knowledge of how the words would actually be spoken. Is it correct for both women to speak a single word, "sì" meaning death? How is it punctuated in English text? One speaks as a declaration, the other responds as a query.
Is this correct?
(Fortune teller): "Sì."
(Young woman): "Sì?" Whose death?
(The rest of the exchange is described in English text.)
Is this correct?
(Fortune teller): "Sì."
(Young woman): "Sì?" Whose death?
(The rest of the exchange is described in English text.)