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Old 02-27-2018, 06:11 AM   #1
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The girl at the gas station

Just filled the car with gas, late evening at an all night gas station. I parked behind a white compact with a silver devil and pitchfork sticker on the trunk. There's a beautiful young Chinese girl standing by the car wearing a tight white sweater, short black leather skirt and black high heels. She was fit, slim waisted, long legged, nice tits pushing out her sweater. As I pumped gas she'd already finished, but primped using her car window as a mirror, zhooshing her long black hair, running her hands over her body to smooth her sweater and skirt, posing left then right, sticking her tits out, pursing her red lips. I followed her in to pay and turns out she'd only bought $20 gas, not a full tank. And she struggled to pay, not with a card but eventually finding a 20. I stood behind her at the counter while she went through her bag. No wedding ring. Yes, I know what you're thinking, why didn't I pay....? So here's the story. The guy pays for the gas. Where is she going? Does she come across there and then, or does he follow her home? Is it the start of something big or just one night?
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Old 02-27-2018, 07:28 AM   #2
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or does she chain him up & enjoy watching the tentacle monster abuse him?
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Old 02-27-2018, 07:37 AM   #3
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No tentacles. No. I've just plotted the start of a great erotic novel like The World of Suzy Wong or The Story of O and you want tentacles. NOOOOOOOOOO
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Old 02-27-2018, 11:11 AM   #4
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The guy pays for the gas, and the girl asks how she can thank him properly. He suggests she have a slice of pie with him at the all-night diner.

The pie is really good, and the guy finds himself licking his fork to get every last bit of pie filling. The girl really likes how he uses his tongue. She suggests they go to her place for a slice of another type of pie.
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Old 02-28-2018, 08:57 PM   #5
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He offers to pay for her gas, but she barely even thanks him, holding her head high, like some spoiled princess. She gets in her car and drives away. He follows her. She pulls into a luxury condo complex. Is she a working girl going to meet a client? Has a well-do-do lover? Or does she live there? Alone? or with others?

He decides to wait and see - sure enough (just like in the movies!) he sees the light come on in an otherwise dark apartment - at least that means someone wasn't waiting up for her. He goes to the entry box and strolls through the names - two of them are Chinese, but only one with a female name. Just his luck, a young couple enter the building so he follows them in and goes up to the apartment. When he knocks, it is a while before she answers, but she does.

1) She is naked, or dressed in a very sexy negligee - "what took you so long?" she says, pulling him in the apartment...
2) She is startled seeing him, he now realizes he made a mistake and apologizes for following her and starts to walk away, she senses he is not a threat and apologizes for not thanking him for the gas money, inviting him in for a cup of tea...
3) When she answers the door, he grabs her, pushing her in, "bitch, you are supposed to say 'thank you' when some one does you a favor", ripping her blouse open...
4) Another woman opens the door, now he is confused, but then he hears the Chinese woman wondering who it is. He stutters then explains to the woman why he followed her friend/roommate. She apologized for her, saying she is used to men paying for everything for her, how spoiled she is, what a horrible roommate she is. She invites him in...
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Old 03-03-2018, 06:17 AM   #6
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The whole thing is a 'fishing trip' with the girl as bait.

The guy is (relatively) rich and married. When he pays for her she gives him her card and asks for him to give her a call sometime. After a few days mulling it over he decides to call her and ends up meeting her for dinner. One thing leads to another and they spend the night together.

The next day his wife confronts him with pictures and video of him cheating on her and demands a divorce, their pre-nup in tatters due to his infidelity. The man starts to make arrangements, but when leaving his lawyer's office a few days later catches sight of the girl in the street and follows her, planning to confront her about everything, only to see her meeting with the wife.

Hiring a private eye to find out what's going on, the man is told that his wife has been sleeping with the chinese girl for months, and the two of them cooked up the scam to trap him and steal all his money in the divorce. The only problem is, he fell for it and has no way to stop the divorce going through even if he does prove his wife colluded with the girl.

His only option now is... ...to be continued.
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Old 03-03-2018, 06:24 AM   #7
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He pays.

They leave.

Police find his remains the next morning.
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Old 03-03-2018, 06:47 AM   #8
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Police find his remains
...rotting in a dumpster three months later.
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...rotting in a dumpster three months later.
..... still with a smile on its face, ear to ear......
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..... still with a smile on its face, ear to ear......
...and they only found him because his erection was holding the dumpster lid open...
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Old 03-03-2018, 03:49 PM   #11
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All very droll. He can rot in a dumpster in the end, but it's what he puts in her end beforehand that I'm interested in.
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Old 03-06-2018, 01:11 PM   #12
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Last scene is his car cruising down a lonely highway, almost out of gas, windows down and purple tentacles lazily stretched out the window, enjoying the warm breeze rushing by. Oh look, a gas station is just up ahead.
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Old 03-10-2018, 12:10 AM   #13
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The guy pays for the gas, and the girl asks how she can thank him properly. He suggests she have a slice of pie with him at the all-night diner.

The pie is really good, and the guy finds himself licking his fork to get every last bit of pie filling. The girl really likes how he uses his tongue. She suggests they go to her place for a slice of another type of pie.
Make it a truck stop with sleep rooms.
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Last scene is his car cruising down a lonely highway, almost out of gas, windows down and purple tentacles lazily stretched out the window, enjoying the warm breeze rushing by. Oh look, a gas station is just up ahead.

With an odd, pulsating green glow from the trunk.
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Old 03-20-2018, 11:26 AM   #15
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With an odd, pulsating green glow from the trunk.
Love the humour guys - thank you for making me giggle this afternoon - love and tentacles to everyone on this thread.
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All very droll. He can rot in a dumpster in the end, but it's what he puts in her end beforehand that I'm interested in.
So maybe she is found in the dumpster as the tentacle monster he implanted crawls out...
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He pays, and suggests they head to a nearby beach for a midnight swim. Once there, they strip for a skinny dip, and things get a little hot as they start making out on entering the surf. He had another motive for the beach, however. He is an alien tentacle monster who only takes on his real form in salt water. As he begins to ensnare her and probe at her orifices, however, she takes on her true form, also only arising in sea water. Seems she recognized his true self and lured him to the sea. Our seducer suddenly finds himself trying to fuck an alien female sperm whale intent on devouring him from his penile tentacle on up.
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This one gave me a bunny. I'm thinking the man's wife watches him from the car as he helps the girl by paying for gas. When he comes back to tge car, the wife asks what that was about, and he explains that he just wanted to do random act of kindness because the girl was short on cash, and that when the girl asks how she can repay him, he says to pay it forward. The girl then pays it forward to his wife, whom she seduces gradually.
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So the hot tart pulls into the filling station for a fillup but can't find her credit card or cash so the fellow magnanimously pays for her and in gratitude she fuck him silly, then reveals that she's an agent of the Galactic Federation sent to Earth to determine if its occupants were worthy of membership, or of obliteration. By his generosity, he has saved all humanity!

At least, that's what he tells his wife when he gets home late, stinking of sex.
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Maybe it's not a gas station at all, but a charging station for electric cars. As everyone knows, charging a battery takes longer than pumping a tank of gas, so the Hero and the Chinese Girl have plenty of time to chat and get to know a little bit about each other. And then "sparks fly," but not only between the cars.
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Old 04-10-2018, 05:40 PM   #21
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Maybe both his and her cars are really transformers that battle the tentacle monsters and fall in love after saving the world.
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