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Old 04-05-2018, 11:33 PM   #1
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I really want someone to write a sexy story about two of my characters...

Hi all,

I have wanted this for a while now. I have a friend who writes Erotica, and I even asked her. She said she would do it, but her life is so busy, she never got around to it.

This story takes place in the future. Two women. One, a high class Escort who can pretty much seduce anyone. Then there is her roommate, a shy, introverted, not as attractive artist (Who is a virgin and also claims Asexuality.)

If anyone is interested, I will provide more details.



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Old 04-06-2018, 11:38 AM   #2
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Old 04-06-2018, 01:48 PM   #3
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Go ahead and offer more details.
Well, the Escort is tall, athletic build, fair skinned, blue eyes, long wavy blue hair. She is the kind of girl men pay thousands of dollars for one night with. And she's been in this line of work since she was a teenager. Pleasing men is what she does, but she is actually a lesbian.

The other one, her roommate, is short, thicker build, also fair skinned, red messy dreadlocks, hazel eyes. She is a shy, introverted artist, and a virgin. She claims to be asexual but is not completely disgusted by sex like some asexuals are. She diesnt seek it out, though.

The two of them start out hating each other. But the escort is so sexually frustrated after so long of being with all these men, that over time an attraction develops. There is also a challenge there... because all her life she has been able to seduce anyone she wants. But now its not so easy.

I am not sure how much backstory to give here. I know authors don't like to be dictated to. Also i typed this whole reply on my phone in kind of a hurry. So i apologize fir any typos.
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Old 04-06-2018, 05:18 PM   #4
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is this a lesbian story ? what category?
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Old 04-06-2018, 05:25 PM   #5
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is this a lesbian story ? what category?
Yes, its a lesbian story.

I am new to this forum. Are the catagories listed somewhere?
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Old 04-06-2018, 07:28 PM   #6
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catagories are listed here

https://www.literotica.com/stories/

what's the purpose you want this story? a fantasy of yours you want to read or something?
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Old 04-06-2018, 08:52 PM   #7
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If it's a lesbian story then Lesbian is the category in which you'd post.
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Old 04-07-2018, 08:53 AM   #8
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catagories are listed here

https://www.literotica.com/stories/

what's the purpose you want this story? a fantasy of yours you want to read or something?
Yes, basically. I have always liked to write, but i am not that good at writing sex scenes. It's actually a little embrrassing to admit but i have fantacized about quite a few of my own characters over the years.

It's hard to explain why, but reading about these two hooking up (imagined by someone else) would be a turn on for me. Kind of a guilty pleasure i guess.
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Old 04-10-2018, 08:07 PM   #9
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On the one hand, it's an interesting challenge to write about asexual characters (even if sex-positive) having sex (especially if it's to be erotic *and* consensual). On the other... most of the stories on literotica are full of sex without much/any sexual attraction, but usually without much depth of character.

Is this a romance? Or just one-sided lust? Are these characters only in your head, or have you published stories with them?
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Old 04-30-2018, 11:46 PM   #10
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On the one hand, it's an interesting challenge to write about asexual characters (even if sex-positive) having sex (especially if it's to be erotic *and* consensual). On the other... most of the stories on literotica are full of sex without much/any sexual attraction, but usually without much depth of character.

Is this a romance? Or just one-sided lust? Are these characters only in your head, or have you published stories with them?
I haven't published anything, no. I have been developing this whole story in my head for a while now. I have some of it actually written out.

There is definitely romance between the two of them, but it does start off as one sided lust. Their relationship actually is pretty complex. They start off hating each other and end up crazy in love. I don't know how much to go into here without telling the whole story, lol.

Idk why it's something I want. But I would love to have someone write a sexy scene between the two of them. Something about reading about the two of them from someone else's perspective turns me on a little. I'm weird, lol.

And yes I know it's been a while. I'm a really busy person.

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Old 05-03-2018, 02:28 AM   #11
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You know what....
Hell, I would give this a try.

I've been meaning to challenge myself writing-wise recently, and this sounds really bloody difficult... and I really like the premise.

A few words of warning/previsos:

-If I am writing the characters, I will do what I thinks makes sense for them. The net result is that I will likely end up writing a story which isn't perfectly true to the characters in YOUR head. I'll do my best, but no promises.

-I'm a guy. As you can imagine, this makes writing lesbian sex WELL somewhat more difficult. I'll take it seriously, and do my best, but bluntly put painting a sexual experiance that you haven't and (kinda by definition) can't be involved in makes things difficult.


That said... I think I can probably pull something like this off. Hell, I arrived at sexual desire a good decade later than everyone else I know, so writing an Ace character might not be so hard (or at least... I probably have better odds of then most other people around here...).

Anyway- whatever- if you're still looking for someone to give this a shot, and if after those slight warnings you would be interested in ME giving it a shot, then shoot me a PM, and we can talk details and I'll see what I can do.
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Old 05-03-2018, 08:47 AM   #12
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You put those paragraphs together just fine. Why can't you write it yourself? Practise makes perfect.

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Hi all,

I have wanted this for a while now. I have a friend who writes Erotica, and I even asked her. She said she would do it, but her life is so busy, she never got around to it.

This story takes place in the future. Two women. One, a high class Escort who can pretty much seduce anyone. Then there is her roommate, a shy, introverted, not as attractive artist (Who is a virgin and also claims Asexuality.)

If anyone is interested, I will provide more details.



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Old 05-07-2018, 02:30 AM   #13
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I hope you like this:
https://www.literotica.com/s/red-and-blue-intertwined
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Old 06-18-2018, 06:06 PM   #14
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OMG... I tried to PM you but don't see that option anywhere.

I LOVED reading this!

I am sorry I didn't see it sooner. I work a lot as a business owner and so I am not online much for leisure time. So please forgive me.

Thank you so much. I would go into more details of why I liked it, but they are kind of complex reasons and I don't want to bore everyone out here in the thread with them. But if I can ever PM you, I will explain it all.

Thank you so much once again. You are amazing!
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Old 06-18-2018, 06:27 PM   #15
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You put those paragraphs together just fine. Why can't you write it yourself? Practise makes perfect.
I suck at writing sex scenes. Every time I try to write a sex scene it either sounds too cold and mechanical, or it sounds like a horny high school kid wrote it.

I am also too critical of myself.

And, to be honest it's almost a kink at this point. I have been writing ever since I was a kid. And I've actually fantasized about my own characters quite a bit over the years. I know it probably dones't make a lot of sense... but reading about an encounter between two of my characters that someone else imagined would be a real turn on for me. I know I'm weird, lol.

And I am in a relationship where I get plenty of satisfaction. It's not a sexual frustration thing or anything like that. It's like a guilty pleasure I suppose.
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Old 06-18-2018, 06:30 PM   #16
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You know what....
Hell, I would give this a try.

I've been meaning to challenge myself writing-wise recently, and this sounds really bloody difficult... and I really like the premise.

A few words of warning/previsos:

-If I am writing the characters, I will do what I thinks makes sense for them. The net result is that I will likely end up writing a story which isn't perfectly true to the characters in YOUR head. I'll do my best, but no promises.

-I'm a guy. As you can imagine, this makes writing lesbian sex WELL somewhat more difficult. I'll take it seriously, and do my best, but bluntly put painting a sexual experiance that you haven't and (kinda by definition) can't be involved in makes things difficult.


That said... I think I can probably pull something like this off. Hell, I arrived at sexual desire a good decade later than everyone else I know, so writing an Ace character might not be so hard (or at least... I probably have better odds of then most other people around here...).

Anyway- whatever- if you're still looking for someone to give this a shot, and if after those slight warnings you would be interested in ME giving it a shot, then shoot me a PM, and we can talk details and I'll see what I can do.
I would love to see what you come up with. You being a guy and taking liberties with the characters is actually pretty intriguing. I would love to hear a man's take on it.

I can't PM you, though. Can you PM me?
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