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Old 08-13-2017, 10:31 PM   #1
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Anna Faith and Lexie Grace

An idea I had fleshed out in my head but I knew I don't have the time to write. Figure I would toss it out here.

I used to find Anna Faith pretty attractive and while I still do, I think she's more plastic than real these days. She turned herself into a literal blow up doll. Meanwhile, I discovered Lexie and found her innocent and cuteness way more attractive than Anna. I thought about the different ways I thought about each girl and how I imagined they'd be treated when being fucked, which spawned this idea.

It takes place at a frat, where Anna has been a frequent guest. Anna the constant attention whore has allowed these guys to do whatever they want to her and they've treated her exactly like she looks, like a sex toy. They fuck her and treat her without regard. They're especially rough and degrading and basically just use Anna to get off. Always in desperate need for attention, Anna has just accepted this as her place and the thing she's good for. When Lexie finally visits her at college, Anna brings her to the frat wanting to open her innocent sister to new experiences. What Anna didn't expect is for the guys in the frat to be completely taken with Lexie and her innocence. They all really like her and find her beautiful.

From this, I have a few moments and scenes in my head. The entire thing takes place in a room and on/off a couch, the sisters one opposite ends of the couch. I picture the guys being really nice to Lexie while treating Anna like garbage. Where a guy gently couches Lexie through a blowjob, others roughly fuck Anna's face. Lexie in on her knees between a guy's legs as he carefully holds her head and hair out of her face, guiding her up and down and sweetly telling her how beautiful she looks. Anna a few feet away, her back bent against the seat, back of her head shoved against the cushions as a guy roughly humps her face, not even letting her breath, the entire time insulting her and talking dirty.

I had this idea of a guy asking Lexie if he could fuck her ass and her saying that she's sorry but she didn't want to because it might hurt. Anna laments about how she was never once asked permission for anything. They just fucked her however they wanted. That same guy goes over and starts fucking Anna's ass, all the while saying how he wished it was Lexie's ass he was fucking instead of this worthless bimbo's.

Someone making out with Lexie, kissing her like a couple just getting serious, while Anna gets choke fucked. Lastly (as far as moments I already have in my head), Lexie riding a guy, going slow and him moaning in pleasure, while Anna gets gangfucked in every hole.

Anyway, that's it. Just wanted to throw it out there. Free to talk about it as well, just been way too busy to actually write the whole thing myself.
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Old 08-29-2017, 09:19 AM   #2
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Romantic gangfuck?

Love these ideas and images and hope you write it. Regarding Lexie, do you think her being treated as a romantic love interest, albeit one whose being facefucked in the same room while Anna is being roughly gangfucked, can this ever proceed to Lexie being romantically gangfucked or is there no such thing? I have this idea which I can't seem to write myself, of a romantic gangfuck where the guys are all polite and all treat the girl well but it's still an all-holes bang.
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Old 08-29-2017, 06:31 PM   #3
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So, they're cosplayers and that made them "famous"? I had to look up the names. How many people totally know who they are and/or how many are in my boat? Since they're "real people" and have some form of "fame" you'd have to place the story in the Celeb category.
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Old 08-30-2017, 03:03 AM   #4
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Love these ideas and images and hope you write it. Regarding Lexie, do you think her being treated as a romantic love interest, albeit one whose being facefucked in the same room while Anna is being roughly gangfucked, can this ever proceed to Lexie being romantically gangfucked or is there no such thing? I have this idea which I can't seem to write myself, of a romantic gangfuck where the guys are all polite and all treat the girl well but it's still an all-holes bang.
Glad you like the idea! Unfortunately, as mentioned, I highly doubt I'll be able to write the entire thing myself. I just don't have the time these days it feels like.

As for the romantic gangfuck, while I don't particularly seeing that playing out that way in this story, it isn't a scenario I find impossible in general. In fact, there was a great story I read a long time ago whose name unfortunately escapes me that involved a romantic gangfuck. A girl wanted to participate in a gangbang and told her boyfriend. They ended up doing it at a party and he stayed in the room with her and held her hand through it. She wasn't fucked roughly but definitely was used by all the guys in all her holes.

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So, they're cosplayers and that made them "famous"? I had to look up the names. How many people totally know who they are and/or how many are in my boat? Since they're "real people" and have some form of "fame" you'd have to place the story in the Celeb category.
Yeah. They're "internet" famous. I'm a little confused by the "in my boat" question.
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I meant I had no clue who those two are. I'm wondering if there are others like me who have no idea. It could make the author's job more difficult if they have to totally explain who their "celebs" are Vrs if they're mainstream celebs.
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Old 09-01-2017, 07:06 PM   #6
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I meant I had no clue who those two are. I'm wondering if there are others like me who have no idea. It could make the author's job more difficult if they have to totally explain who their "celebs" are Vrs if they're mainstream celebs.
Oh, yes. I'm certain there's a lot of people that don't know who they are, but in case any writers were familiar and were interested in the idea I put it up.
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Glad you like the idea! Unfortunately, as mentioned, I highly doubt I'll be able to write the entire thing myself. I just don't have the time these days it feels like.

As for the romantic gangfuck, while I don't particularly seeing that playing out that way in this story, it isn't a scenario I find impossible in general. In fact, there was a great story I read a long time ago whose name unfortunately escapes me that involved a romantic gangfuck. A girl wanted to participate in a gangbang and told her boyfriend. They ended up doing it at a party and he stayed in the room with her and held her hand through it. She wasn't fucked roughly but definitely was used by all the guys in all her holes.



Yeah. They're "internet" famous. I'm a little confused by the "in my boat" question.
The closest I've seen to a romantic gangfuck is this one, Britney Amber fucking her husband and his friends because she wants to https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.p...h55f8c2f2257d1
She's all coy and they're gentle so I guess its romantic.
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Old 09-02-2017, 09:57 PM   #8
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Oh, yes. I'm certain there's a lot of people that don't know who they are, but in case any writers were familiar and were interested in the idea I put it up.
Celebs are difficult subjects because you *do* depend on readers knowing who they are. The quality of celebrity comes and goes, grows and fades. You've never heard of folks I think are famous, and vice versa.

Rather than depending on readers recognizing characters, base your players on celebs and maintain your own detailed mental picture of their scene. Closely describe them, maybe even hint that they're not merely fictional. But make them your own creations. You'll be glad you did.
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Old 09-03-2017, 06:13 AM   #9
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Celebs are difficult subjects because you *do* depend on readers knowing who they are. The quality of celebrity comes and goes, grows and fades. You've never heard of folks I think are famous, and vice versa.

Rather than depending on readers recognizing characters, base your players on celebs and maintain your own detailed mental picture of their scene. Closely describe them, maybe even hint that they're not merely fictional. But make them your own creations. You'll be glad you did.
I mean, that's your opinion and that's fine but not mine.

I wrote a story about Taylor Momsen and was just as pleased with it as if it as I would have been if it wasn't. Readers who know who she is would enjoy it of they are fans of hers. Readers who don't know who she is I try to describe her in a way that paints a picture for them. There is no right or wrong way here. Just preference.

I prefer this story with these two people because that's the way I conceived it.

Of course, by the set up of this board, it doesn't matter now since the idea is out there in the ether. Anyone can take it and do whatever the hell they want with it.
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Old 09-03-2017, 03:08 PM   #10
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Celebs are difficult subjects because you *do* depend on readers knowing who they are. The quality of celebrity comes and goes, grows and fades. You've never heard of folks I think are famous, and vice versa.

Rather than depending on readers recognizing characters, base your players on celebs and maintain your own detailed mental picture of their scene. Closely describe them, maybe even hint that they're not merely fictional. But make them your own creations. You'll be glad you did.
Exactly. If you have Fana Aith, who is described perfectly like Anna Faith, we don't have to know who the celeb is. The readers receive a mental image that matches your own.
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