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Old 01-22-2017, 07:51 AM   #151
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Angeline, your poetry is ethereal whereas mine is so solid .......... sigh.
At least it's not a labor of love that turns out to be a vowel movement leaving the reader flushed.


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Old 01-22-2017, 09:46 PM   #152
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At least it's not a labor of love that turns out to be a vowel movement leaving the reader flushed.


Toil etry.
Perhaps you should stick to chamber music ........... wonders if that means the same over the pond?
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I think yours is clear and mine vague. It's all in the perspective!
Vague my foot!
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Blessed are the cracked for it is they that let in the light
They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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