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Old 04-08-2018, 10:06 PM   #1
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Beta-Reader - Incest/Taboo

Hi,

I'd like to get a fresh pair of eyes on a story I'm working on that will be going in the incest/taboo category.

It's about 8,000 words and is the first of three chapters.

I'm much more concerned with general feedback about characters, story arc and dialogue than I am about grammar, spelling, etc.

Please lmk if you have any questions.
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Old 04-10-2018, 09:48 AM   #2
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Hi,

I'd like to get a fresh pair of eyes on a story I'm working on that will be going in the incest/taboo category.

It's about 8,000 words and is the first of three chapters.

I'm much more concerned with general feedback about characters, story arc and dialogue than I am about grammar, spelling, etc.

Please lmk if you have any questions.
I'll take a look for you, PM for e-mail address
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