Boy! When I ask for feedback . . .

PrevertOne said:

This is, by far, the longest rant anyone has ever put on one of my stories. Don't know if this is praise or . . . something. Anyone would like to take a look at it? http://www.literotica.com/stories/storyfeedbackboard.php?id=461929 I could put all the responses to all my stories together and still not match this for volume.

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"I read somewhere that a man takes what he wants. I want you, I'm taking you."

That's Tom talking to his mother Janelle in this excellent story of hot motherfucking. The comments of the jerks who claim that the author is a plagiarist are annoying. They somehow sense that this is the same story "word for word" that they've read before. If they remember it's the same story "word for word" how come they can't remember the title or any part of it? Cite the alleged original story or else stop maligning a promising new contributor of great tales of son into mom fucking. Meanwhile the rest of us will enjoy AZ's fine works, including this one. Janelle is a devious woman. She's madly attracted to what her big strong boy Tom's got jumping around in his pants, even thinking about whats lurking behind his fly gets her wetter than she's ever been before. But mom has a kink. She wants to be totally dominated by her son, made to submit to him, forced to serve his big hard cock. Janelle allows Tom to slurp her twat, she sucks off his big cock, she even lets him fuck her. But to see what her son will do, she insists on being in full control, including limiting him as to times and days (no weekends). Tom goes along--until something clicks in his head. A MAN TAKES WHAT HE WANTS, she'd written on her delectable body. Now Tom, the proud young cock-carrier and balls-bearer, decides he'll just take what he wants--and what he wants is his own mother's cunt whenever he fucking feels like it. He stops her from going out "clubbing," he forces her to submit, she pretends to resist, he's a strong boy and he exerts his strength. His mother is helpless, as she always wanted to be. He shreds her clothes and his own, his stiff powerful prick is in full view, seeing it mom's like a deer caught in the headlights, and the boy just shoves his big prick up his mother's sopping wet twat, the same twat he came out of. Tom gives her the fuck of her life, of his too, and he ends by blowing his hot young balls and shooting a huge dose of semen up where he was once a baby. He'll be doing that a lot from now on.

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"You like the way my balls smell?" I asked.

That's big strong good-looking Max speaking to his mother. I could have quoted any number of similar statements from this excellent story, but I like this one because it's so damn raw. Of course his mother likes--really, loves--the way his balls smell. She plasters her face between Max's ass cheeks and slurps his squeaky clean asshole, and loves its musky scent too. Max's mom is the kind of mother all boys should have. Most boys have to make do with noticing their mother darting glances at what they've got jumping around in their pants. Not Max. His mother fucking worships his big hard cock and his heavy loaded balls. She chews on Max's smelly jockstraps and joyously welcomes his cock in every hole she has. Mom cums like crazy and blisses out when her boy blows his balls up inside her. Max is a super-virile young male, so he fucks every cunt that comes along. Understandable. But I didn't care for his mom's lesbo action. It takes away from the centrality of motherfucking in the story. Okay if she strums her twat watching her big boy fucking the shit out of some random twat or other. Still, five stars for a superb job.

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AZMotherLover said:

Who has that kind of time on their hands? Does anyone know who this is?

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AMoveableBeast said:

I leave fairly long comments, as anyone that has received one can attest. To me, it isn't about surplus time, it's about consideration. Whether I loved your story or didn't care for, I'm going to do my best to tell you why. To me, the feedback really is the value of this site, other than being an assembly line for masturbation material.

Alas, I didn't write yours.

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PrevertOne said:

This is, by far, the longest rant anyone has ever put on one of my stories. Don't know if this is praise or . . . something. Anyone would like to take a look at it? http://www.literotica.com/stories/storyfeedbackboard.php?id=461929 I could put all the responses to all my stories together and still not match this for volume.

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PrevertOne said:

This is, by far, the longest rant anyone has ever put on one of my stories. Don't know if this is praise or . . . something. Anyone would like to take a look at it? http://www.literotica.com/stories/storyfeedbackboard.php?id=461929 I could put all the responses to all my stories together and still not match this for volume.

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